In the Service of Mystery (Pt. 19)
'_ i huffed and ran a paw over my face, glad that i wasn't going to suffer any more of reginald minutus' stilted prose.
Lab Report, Dr. Renat Rodion: Study of Subject 13, "Echo", and Local Wildlife
"Lab Report, Dr. Renat Rodion: Study of Subject 13, 'Echo', and Local Wildlife" _by Brian Colfxire._ **COORDINATES OF WORLD** : Within the NGC 224 (Andromeda Galaxy), SPS 403 (Solar Planetary Systems), name designation of home world,...
We Don't Want You Here...
"Nanuk! Be careful out there!" the boy's mother called. Well... boy might be an understatement. Nanuk was an adult by what we might consider. A tall, lanky young man, green eyes and long white hair. Not uncommon in his little home village. Many of the...
Read Harry Potter, the Aenid of our times: Srsly (4 real!)
This also applies to style - if you think hemmingway is it, write neat uncluttered prose all the time and never experiment with alternatives, that's all you'll be able to write. you need to branch out.
The Fifth Day
There were few benefits being dead. It was something Reynard learned on his fifth day being dead, and he hated each part of it. The fox stepped through the oak doors of the museum, before observing the statue of a wolf he wasn't familiar with. Part of...
Sky Ocean Chapter 1
As the less than enthusiastic feathered teen murmured a morning prose he lost balance and fell in a heap of pearl white feathers and tangled limbs, in a mess upon his bedroom floor. "...in form less than composed and head more than screaming, i puzzled over
You ARE a writer! : Srsly (2nd step on the road to success!)
Our brethren who sling around paint brushes are perhaps the only ones who will understand that nagging feeling you have (or should have, unless you are a deluded maniac - also your prose sucks and i hate you.) whenever you sit down at the keyboard.
[SFW] Squirrely Days #008 - Kylola
#7 of squirrely days [sfw] [slice-of-life] [alt romance] [none traditional fantasy] squirrelly days is a slice of fantasy life written for and dedicated to people who wished more books let them use their imagination more and painted with prose less.
Circles: a retrospective review
The final volume, the novel, also suffers because its prose, while functional and simplistic, is too functional and simplistic for my tastes. the novel is also written as if the characters were all human, which sets up a few jarring moments.
a quiet dark
trapped feelings of anger can't get out no one to shout at nothing to shout at he wants to see her again but it's dark he can see a dim light above maybe she's out there maybe she's down here his thirst to explore is to...
Part 2
#2 of folder second part of a much longer (hopefully more interesting) price-of-crap-prose. comment and let me know how i'm doing. silent readers are a killer. atlas opened the door of the dingy motel with the intent to slip way quietly.
Moroneae Domesticus
Foreward: Spiders are just little pests . . . unless you work with a bunch of idiots. An absolutely absurd comedy piece, inspired by Monty Python, cartoons, and my own debilitating fear of spiders. This would probably work better in a more...