The Petting Zoo Draft
Mr hamilton announces, "the draft will start in 20 minutes. directors, walk around the animals and meet them. animals, don't take it personally if you are ignored.
The Ways of the Tribe - Chapter 5
As before, remember this is in first draft state, so please do excuse an errors/clunky passages you see, but also please do point them out so they don't persist into future drafts.
Las Vegas
The palm cockatoo had spent extra time studying cox and windcreek's playing styles after the draft, learning how they played and figuring out how she could outplay them.
The Ways of the Tribe - Chapter 2
As before, remember this is in first draft state, so please do excuse an errors/clunky passages you see, but also please do point them out so they don't persist into future drafts.
The Ways of the Tribe - Chapter 6
As before, remember this is in first draft state, so please do excuse an errors/clunky passages you see, but also please do point them out so they don't persist into future drafts.
The Ways of the Tribe - Chapter 1
As before, remember this is in first draft state, so please do excuse an errors/clunky passages you see, but also please do point them out so they don't persist into future drafts.
Zootopia: First Salvo part 6
Cesar: i will draft a speech on civil defense for broadcast later in the week. mister secretary? i would like you to finish this draft you've prepared to present to the city counsel. chief wilde? chief brunty?
The Lamp
"What do you need, Zack?" A voice yelled. "Alright, I'll check." The figure entered the dark and damp until they were able to discover a light switch in the centre. After turning it on, they could see lots of...
Editing
draft 3 (and beyond): this draft is where i begin to polish my writing. if i am writing a simple short story without a lot of plot, i may only polish it once or twice.
Draft
The floor was a deep marbled black that shone with a metallic glint under the soft blue lights that danced across the bodies of furs from all ages, species, and backgrounds, mostly in groups of twos or threes. On the left side was a bar table...
The Ways of the Tribe - Chapter 3
As before, remember this is in first draft state, so please do excuse an errors/clunky passages you see, but also please do point them out so they don't persist into future drafts.
To Be Keeper
This is one of the few pieces that a second draft has been worked on a little. critique welcome.