How does everyone feel about my stories?
I just found myself really curious about his lately. I'm wondering how well my stories are received. I like to think I do a pretty decent job, but I could be wrong. Is there anything in particular anyone feels I need to improve on? Is there anything...
The Woodland Visitor Ch 22: The Fate of the World
With greater rank "does" come greater responsibility... who woulda thunk that??? anyway before you go calling me every name in the book, just let me grab a pencil. i'm sure there's some i haven't heard yet.
To You, I Belong: Chapter 2
He looked back to see a now very familiar doe. "sharp as always," she said with a laugh. erik quickly went over and hugged her closely. "it's so great to see you again, holly! for a second, i didn't know it was you!"
Scepters
"does that mean the east might have something to do with this? the governor's league? the private armies?" "don't ask me. i'm a simple southwesterner," she reminded me. "i can't say.
Inside, Outside, Clear
And the doe, with her hoofed feet, clanked off. "tell him to ... " "inside, inside ... " "get the fucking ... " "you're on radio. being monitored. control your temper.
Hunter of Worlds: Phase1-Chapter7
Looking back to the doe still curled beneath her blankets, the wildcat felt his jaw open to speak, but couldn't seem to find any words. "cat got your tongue, hun?" **_"... actually.. i think a doe has it."_** "mm..
Hunter of Worlds: Phase1-Chapter6
does it hurt?"_ **_"... yeah.. yeah, it hurts."_** _"kale.."_ **_"let's not start... with nicknames... you get attached to things... that you give nicknames...
Amateur Heroics - Part 1
"bill, i think shi's asleep," the doe grinned. "you brought us the narcoleptic avenger." jasmine shook hir head, pointed antlers swishing.
Mrs. Mac: Sneak Peek
The pallor of depression was beginning to show in the lines of her face and a heavy stone seemed to rest in the pit of her stomach, thus when a soft knock rapped at her door, she was surprised, her softly rounded ears perking up. She almost assumed she...
The North Tower
That's what love does." her eyes again regarded me with their special warmth. "the grail is always worth pursuing, and we sip from it whenever we can. we share it whenever we can." "what does that look like?"
Fire and Ice - Chapter Four - Dark Secrets Revealed
To sir kathis, it felt as if a mountain was pinning him down, yet the actual weight of the doe 's hot, sweaty body against his was barely noticeable.
A Soft, Soft Night
Opal asked, her doe-like eyes sparkling. he met her gaze. "i don't know," he confessed. "just ... a lot of furs are having it. thought it might relax us." "well, i'm relaxed.