Stabbed in the Back
criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated. hello, and good day, my heart you did slay. i loved you, truly, you left me, unruly. you were the love of my life, now a memory of strife.
Algerian Speed (part 2)
Having one of our drivers criticize his or her own team in public and in front of media will be against the terms of contract and it can be punishable by fine or even suspension, depending on the severity."
Hell Jumpers, part two
I'd rather have criticism then praise, so put plenty of it (constructure criticism please).
Double Birthday Surprises ch. 1
"critical strike!!" he pounced directly on top of him, knocking him flat on his back; then bit him fiercely in the chest, revealing his weak spot.
Red Shadow
I probably won't be accused of killing them; the police know my m.o. and know that i don't use guns, but their captain is a known critic of mine. i'm going to die. i don't know when or where.
The Fate That Befell Yndyr: Chapter One
Energy critical. new power source detected. emergency bonding initiated.** **.** **.** **.** **\>bonding complete. beginning to power up systems** **.** **.** **.** **\>incomplete. organic memory detected. interfering with systems.
The Governor and Her Shadow Chapter Two
**criticism or feedback is appreciated! :)**
Valentines day gift
Let's see what all you critics think. :p learning what it means, only to have all the doors closed, vainly i waited. everyday i fought, over and over again, finally at end. meeting one so pure, you picked me up with such ease.
replaced
Got bored so tried to write a poem. constructive criticism welcomed. you told me you cared for me you said you'd never leave me; was that all lies? did i really mean that little that you could walk away so easy?
Going Concerns (Chapter 5)
"you said we were stopping to buy critical supplies!" "we were." he handed her one of the mugs. "you never asked what i considered critical." she laughed, taking a sip. "so. do you have anywhere to be today, somewhere that's not right here?
Fledgling Developments part 1
Many minutes of stalking came down to these critical few seconds, and success or failure would be decided right now.
The edge
Constructive criticism is welcome!