The First Stryke
I'm just an senile old-man who scares little children." and with this last commentary he walked away, leaving the fastbiter alone with his toughts.
Dons Nation 3 - Week 4
We have to start over, marco; i need my commentary in here. garner: you can add your commentary in here now. it's not like i skipped to the next segment yet. woods: but i need my flare in the beginning. it's what gets me going in this podcast.
Paradise Ascendant
A social commentary following roland everett, a wolf at the top of the caste hierarchy in a speciesist dystopia. this series will include extreme themes, so remember to check the tags on each chapter for content information.
Gryphon Cooks Potatoes, Part 1 (Otherwise Untitled)
It offered no commentary, waiting for her to falter and decide of her own accord to the merits it offered. it would be there, if she chose to reach for it. she looked back to the image of a cactus, as if hoping for something of encouragement.
Zootopia: Brave New World - Interrogatory
The animals watching the scene by the double-sided mirror looking at the scene, and wondering what was going to happen next, and just how bogo was going to answer to the commentaries that the cougar was making.
Some Sort of Context
"i wish... this wasn't so awkward..." he muttered, in a moment of candid meta-commentary. "me too..." wallace said abruptly. brad looked up at him warily, and sighed. "i've kind've been a dumbass about... it."
Cyanide of Riddance chapter 15.
You know, like social commentary. everybody's knows that these days, if you want to be raunchy and serious on the internet, you need to also be relentlessly preachy." "too bad we never had a point," icicle said. "hey! know what you should do?
A Dull Dragon - 1
Rather, i shall end this commentary and continue to recount those events... ~ i stood up and took to walking, turning away from the mountain, away from the other dragons, disappearing under the cover of the canopy of trees above me.
The Sisters of Vengeance
Sometimes that's just because i like the lyrics, but sometimes they're a direct commentary on the originals. i don't know if there's a term for that, as a poetic form, but look up leonard cohen's "the sisters of mercy" if you want that bit of context.
Faux Fossil
"yes, it's providing quite biting commentary on our conversation." he looked back and forth between the two badgers. "no? nothing? well, i thought it was funny...."
Chapter 8 Life and The universe
If you happen to read both my story and my commentary, i'd appreciate if you dropped a comment with your honest opinion on this three questions game as a whole.
Limerent Object (parts 26-30)
I shook my head to try to clear the clinging rumination, closing the book of pauline commentaries and the notebook that i had been attacking with a highlighter and pen.