Downpour

When the new car's door slammed shut, rusty turned to look and saw someone running up to him, an umbrella gripped in both paws.

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Ch. 15 -- Kidnap

More giggling erupted from under the umbrellas as the pair of them hurried down the hallway away from him.

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A Day at the Waterpark

Matty was taking a little break on one of the little benches under the little umbrellas, his headfur shiny with dampness. "gettin' to ya, boss?" i squeezed onto the bench beside him and rubbed a paw across his forehead to wipe the sweat from his eyes.

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Master & Slave: Lost and Found

It was this position that kept her from seeing the male stop beside her, turning and standing over her as the rain pattered against his umbrella.

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Reintroduction of a Forgotten Friend

Lucy picked up an umbrella leaning against the chair with a handle like a katana, "i see you've noticed my umbrella taffy. cutest thing ever, isn't it? watch!" she opened it up, and it was nothing more than an umbrella.

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Falling at a Coffee Shop Part II

Looking up, wes saw that an umbrella was now shielding him from the rain. he smiled weakly. a familiar voice filled wes' ears, "good afternoon." wes looked down from the umbrella; his gaze met by jay's smiling face.

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Lonely Oak Chapter 123 - Principal Versus Principle

She only smiled at him for a moment, her head tilted so her temple rested against the pole of the umbrella,as if to say _are you done, silly?_ he sighed, and reached for the umbrella. "all right, fine. i'll walk you to school, then."

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Silver Stream Memory 19

"no worries, see," chris god remarked and two formal angels set up lawn chairs and umbrellas for behemoth on my right and god to sko's left.

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Dragon's Coin

Coin walked up to the front doors, opened one up and saw the seven year old dragon girl standing there, playing with opening and shutting the umbrella.

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Foggy Ewe Chapter 2

Why didn't chimeri lend me her umbrella before she left? i drop the angel's hand and duck under the roof of the dry porch. “baaaaates!" i call out. the angel snickers behind me. “baaaaaaates."

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As you know Bob, show don't tell: Srsly (7 shows, no tells!)

For example, in something written in the first person, whenever your viewpoint character tells the audience something that he doesn't know at that point in the narrative - 'she'd taken an umbrella that day, and i told her she'd been foolish.

Clown Mare 3

Archduchess opened her mouth and put her teeth together when she slanted both of her eyes with the weird umbrella to block the sun out.