Fathom's Phantoms, Ch 5: It's Only the Beginning
Mike nodded to himself, tweaking a few words and revising one of the sentences before uploading it, and he continued the playback.
PSB: A Basic Introductory
Originally, the rule said the first to orgasm lost, but i have revised this as i felt it was much too restricting for determining who was superior in the relationship.
The Gaming Journal #1: The Problem with Fighting Games
Koei tecmo's_dead or alive 5_also had three revisions over the course of 4 years.
Angie (Epilouge and Author Notes)
This story took me a total of four months to write, revise, and rewrite. i revised the story one last time before posting it here. yes, i am a delphinic zoophile. this story was written entirely by me, without any personal help.
(Revised Edition) Human Origins Chapter 1: Beginnings
Human origins chapter 1: beginnings hello, fellow humans and furs, after letting this story sit on sofurry for awhile while i worked out some problems in real life, i felt the need to revise it a little bit and add a little bit of detail.
Chapter 1: A Discordant Melody
I have taken the time to proofread and make a few light revisions to reduce redundancies and remove contradictions, but there will still be errors.
Married!
Afterwards, i'll go back through and do a major revision on the series. gotta get'em all ready for publication and such, y'know? lots of changes to be made, based on everyone's feedback! now...
Precious Memories (Act1, Book1, Chapter3)
#3 of twilight of the gods book1 revision divergency here - i split the old chapter 3 into two parts during the august 2015 revision! so ... there's that.
The Story of Legoiceking Furditore
A revised bio of my main character legoiceking :3 the story of legoiceking furditore lego was born from a fallen dogtaur angel named xavier. lego was split from his father as a type of revenge and ended up in the 1300s.
After the Storm - Part 24 [The Visitors]
However, inspiration struck and i thought that i could improve the chapter, so i decided to revise it.
Only Human (Revised), Chapter 2
#2 of only human (revised) centuries after the apocalypse, humanity is gone and earth is uninhabitable. genetically engineered super soldiers now rule the solar system.. then a derelict space craft appears, a forgotten relic of a long forgotten time.
Dear Journal (First-Person Mrs. Krieg POV)
Unfortunately, i had to revise parts of my diet. for example, with my husband mark to help me, i've had to avoid wine, too much dairy, as well as caffeine.