PSB: A Basic Introductory
Originally, the rule said the first to orgasm lost, but i have revised this as i felt it was much too restricting for determining who was superior in the relationship.
The Gaming Journal #1: The Problem with Fighting Games
Koei tecmo's_dead or alive 5_also had three revisions over the course of 4 years.
Fathom's Phantoms, Ch 5: It's Only the Beginning
Mike nodded to himself, tweaking a few words and revising one of the sentences before uploading it, and he continued the playback.
Angie (Epilouge and Author Notes)
This story took me a total of four months to write, revise, and rewrite. i revised the story one last time before posting it here. yes, i am a delphinic zoophile. this story was written entirely by me, without any personal help.
(Revised Edition) Human Origins Chapter 1: Beginnings
Human origins chapter 1: beginnings hello, fellow humans and furs, after letting this story sit on sofurry for awhile while i worked out some problems in real life, i felt the need to revise it a little bit and add a little bit of detail.
Chapter 1: A Discordant Melody
I have taken the time to proofread and make a few light revisions to reduce redundancies and remove contradictions, but there will still be errors.
Married!
Afterwards, i'll go back through and do a major revision on the series. gotta get'em all ready for publication and such, y'know? lots of changes to be made, based on everyone's feedback! now...
The Story of Legoiceking Furditore
A revised bio of my main character legoiceking :3 the story of legoiceking furditore lego was born from a fallen dogtaur angel named xavier. lego was split from his father as a type of revenge and ended up in the 1300s.
Precious Memories (Act1, Book1, Chapter3)
#3 of twilight of the gods book1 revision divergency here - i split the old chapter 3 into two parts during the august 2015 revision! so ... there's that.
After the Storm - Part 24 [The Visitors]
However, inspiration struck and i thought that i could improve the chapter, so i decided to revise it.
Dear Journal (First-Person Mrs. Krieg POV)
Unfortunately, i had to revise parts of my diet. for example, with my husband mark to help me, i've had to avoid wine, too much dairy, as well as caffeine.
Journey to the West
I think it actually makes for a better story now that i've revised it a bit._ _enjoy!_ **journey to the west** **chapter one:** the day had turned out to be yet another long, hot day.