?A Boy and His Ampharos
So please enjoy it and criticism is greatly appreciated. a boy and his ampharos warning: this story contains pokemon and soft non-fatal vore so if you dont like this thing do no read this story.
Paraskepite- Chapter Fourteen
The detective is alive, he's in the hospital in critical condition. not to mention the police are on a manhunt to find you. i said i wanted an accident."
Lost Pokemon Episodes: Episode 13 Royal Seafront Assult
Vinzith attacks again but trips again this time hurting himself critically. eleckid take this time to land a good punch on vinzith causing the plant pokémon to become more exhausted.
StarFox Universe [R]aid: 01 Nothing is Routine Anymore
A critical head shot. taking a glance over at falco's target, he was astonished to see that there was no hint of impact. he heard the avian cursing, his weapon shattered and the feathers on his hand lightly burnt.
Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Out of the Dark
Meanwhile, a deadly threat for the ship manifests itself as one of its fusion reactors approaches a critical overload. ## chapter 2 adrift in a sea of stars per aspera ad astra.
Stabbed in the Back
criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated. hello, and good day, my heart you did slay. i loved you, truly, you left me, unruly. you were the love of my life, now a memory of strife.
Valentines day gift
Let's see what all you critics think. :p learning what it means, only to have all the doors closed, vainly i waited. everyday i fought, over and over again, finally at end. meeting one so pure, you picked me up with such ease.
replaced
Got bored so tried to write a poem. constructive criticism welcomed. you told me you cared for me you said you'd never leave me; was that all lies? did i really mean that little that you could walk away so easy?
Double Birthday Surprises ch. 1
"critical strike!!" he pounced directly on top of him, knocking him flat on his back; then bit him fiercely in the chest, revealing his weak spot.
Hell Jumpers, part two
I'd rather have criticism then praise, so put plenty of it (constructure criticism please).
The Fate That Befell Yndyr: Chapter One
Energy critical. new power source detected. emergency bonding initiated.** **.** **.** **.** **\>bonding complete. beginning to power up systems** **.** **.** **.** **\>incomplete. organic memory detected. interfering with systems.
Red Shadow
I probably won't be accused of killing them; the police know my m.o. and know that i don't use guns, but their captain is a known critic of mine. i'm going to die. i don't know when or where.