Peacekeepers: Prologue
I am also trying to break sentences up more and use fewer commas. i think it's making it more interesting to read and i actually enjoyed writing this. another small thing i am going to try and roll for different things that happen.
The Gamer's Crossing 11 - And Then There Were Five
She started to shakily write out the exact words, too scared to miss a single comma while whimpering to herself, before finishing her note which james snatched from her.
Stralia - Ocean's Depths
Next chapter i take aim at my comma useage, while it all looks above board i can't say i like how many i throw down, so we'll work on that. anyway, i hope you guys like it and the way the series is going so far!
Flying Circus
Just a little piece i wrote, originally to submit to the writer's clinic at the oxfurred comma virtual event, however the story mutated into something longer as i grew to enjoy the change of setting.
"The Thin Line," Part VV
To cpl winterbough comma grainmaster c/o 37th regt flourford stop orders follow stop escort capt chitterleigh persoc tor stop urgent you arrive soonest stop priority given to your transport
Last Light
“nikola and i just made a bet, he says you’ll be put in a comma for thirty hours this time. i bet sixty.” the following grin was slightly apologetic. “thanks for the vote of confidence.” fox muttered. “anytime mccloud.
The Children of Phi Centauri
Gladys denzel in the neighboring cubicle typed a comma in her calculations, stubbed out her cigarette and looked over the rim of her glasses. “relax," she said. “he won't do you no harm." “no harm? it scared the shit out of me!" gladys laughed.
1 - shiva - beggining
It took 3 days for shiva to awake from his comma at this point the small wounds have almost fully heal and some of big wounds where half healed. he look around to see were he is and he saw leila there and tried to ask were he was.
She will not get us
Before messing with the genetic merging marco and i decided to put julius into an induced comma while we tried to figure how to start the genetic dripping as i had named it.
The Fall Of Max
She took max to her house in the woods out side of the town, and laid him down on the bed softly and nursed him back to health. another 2 days passed slowly before max slowly came around from his comma like state.
A New Life in a New Body: Charater Bios of Mike and Sherri
He was in the hospital for 3 months most of which he was in a comma for. he felt most had assumed he was dead. the only one who wouldn't believe that was sherri.
Ander - Chapter 6, Subchapter 23
commas, exclamation points, question marks, hyphens, colons, _semi_-colons, the more the merrier. _are you really going to let that oaf push you around like this?