Editing
I will fix sentences that make no sense, move paragraphs around, and correct grammar errors that make me sound like a fifth grader. draft 3 (and beyond): this draft is where i begin to polish my writing.
Rising Anew-Chapter 3, part 2-
"well no sense standing around i guess, lets go." she said grumpily. she was not all that sure about this little adventure purrma's letter was sending them on, but she knew she had to stay with narcenac.
SENTIENCE - Chapter Two - Contact
This beast made no sense to me. "what are you?" i whispered to myself, straining my eyes to see more. instantly, the creature's eyes bore straight in my direction. more intense light emanated from it, this time pointed at me.
The Mute - Chapter 2: Kyle's House
Now being in fifth grade, i had no sense of romance. but looking back i realize it was incredibly romantic. the two of us, alone on a calm fall night. "this is my favorite kind of weather" kyle murmured.
The way she hunted me: Preparations
If you haven't read any of my stories before this, then this will make no sense at all and you'll have a bad taste in your mouth... and ill laugh at you.
Callion: Forgotten Lands
Have you no sense!" commotion was going on in the room. "silence!" the eldest yelled banging his gavel aganst the desk. " callion you are the epitome of the starward knight's, yet you burst into the meeting like some rabid orc?"
Torn Apart
"well at least your parents care about you even if they have no sense of fashion" "parent" i said harshly "and she just cares about her image not me."
Les Animaux Confeiture finale
It made no sense to him, but he felt that this was simply part of the next phase in this confectionary nightmare.
No One Dossier: R3
This reality has no sense of space or time and a person can be seen travelling along a straight path only to find another person travelling in the opposite direction, upside down several metres above them.
Forgotten Ch. 6
Honestly what would jase think if i responded to a text about 5oz of meat to be shipped to a place called "nari". as i said no sense what so ever. i finished my bread and wiped my hands off on the tank top i had worn.
Bradon (Wilde) Chapter 2
It makes no sense with bradon, he usually explodes and forgets about it." has she looked at one of the pictures, while trying hard not shed any tears. she thancontinued, "but back on subject.
Stupid Rabbit - a dark fable. *short story*
He replied in a series of sounds and syllables that made no sense to the others. "he's funny," giggled lilac. "say something else." once again, the new rabbit made foreign noises and pointed towards the mountains.