Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
'show don't tell' refers to a method of writing often given to beginners to improve their writing. 'telling' is the act of quite simply saying something in the story happens - for example, driving home.
The Lead Crown: Ch 4b, Your Highness (Pt 1)
Tobias had taken to fever and his breathing was far from normal, but within an hour, after the benefit of an herbal chest rub, the prong horn was decidedly improved-- not well... but improved.
Reaching for the Stars - Chapter 03: Football Buddies
We still have around three months so keep up the good work and keep on improving." everyone clapped their hands again, and this time the coach smiled. "thank you for coming today. have a great weekend."
Just a Normal Study Session
The whole point of this study session was to improve _your_ grades. uh, though of course i would be glad to help you too, glecion. we can all learn together." "oh, yes. all learn together.
How does everyone feel about my stories?
Is there anything in particular anyone feels i need to improve on? is there anything that you rather enjoy about my work in particular? i guess i just want some feedback.
The Origin of Shadow - Chapter 4
Try smelling something, or listening, because that first conversion was to improve your sense. go on, give it a try" i decided to humour him and try it, so i closed my eyes and focused on my sense of smell and hearing.
MoonDust, Chapter 5
Washing out frightened her, but what more could she do to improve? her mother's parting words echoed through her mind. had signing up been a terrible mistake?
Wolfkin d20 Base Class
improved evasion (ex) at 16th level, a wolfkin's evasion improves.
Chapter XX: This Bond Between Us
A week later with little improvement in sonia's behavior, and no improvement in kaeden's mood, ashleigh decided her outing with her male charge could no longer be delayed.
The sphinx (game writeup)
Natural weapon (claw), improved natural weapon (bite), improved grapple, improved disarm | | [environment](http://www.d20srd.org/srd/monsters/intro.htm#environment): | his chamber | | [organization](http://www.d20srd.org/srd/monsters/intro.htm
Behind Locked Doors | Finale
Thank you guys again, i wouldn't have any reason to write and strive to improve if it weren't for you guys.
Aspiring Authors Toll Road to Publication
Even if the product doesn't affect the market substantively, a person may find self-improvement upon publishing a book." there are various avenues available for self-publication.