Blood, Sweat, and Diesel: Introduction
If people like this, i'll upload more of it, so feedback is valued! altama was a beautiful land. it consisted of tall grass prairies, rocky canyons, and scattered forests of evergreen trees.
Stones in the Pond - Chapter One
This is intended to be a series, so hopefully i'll get some good feedback and will post more :).
Daily Tale 07/24/14: Sick Day
If you could give me feedback and critique i'd love it. also, if you find any grammar or spelling errors please point them out. i also encourage all you furs who are writers or who want to write to try this idea and see how much they improve.
The Struggle Within
Give me feedback
The Xenomorph Saga: Prologue
As i always say, your comments and feedback are greatly appreciated. unlike previously, however, your feedback will not determine whether or not i continue writing this story.
Wasteland Survivor - Prologue
#1 of wasteland survivor first story here, please give any and all feedback, don't hold back :) as for the source, the first thing i can say is lucid dreaming is a blast once you get the hang of it, i recount my story so far each night (kinda like a recap
Teenagers (Part 6)
And of course, feedback is greatly appreciated!
Last one left: prologue
Criticism and feedback will be appreciated so i can make improvements in the future and if you liked what you've read then don't hesitate to leave a watch and a fav! enjoy!!!!! i can still feel my sins howling over my shoulder.
In the Shadow of Moonlight - Ch. 1
Shout out to dog_girl_kari and aronpuma for reading and providing feedback! i'm always looking to improve my writing and will appreciate any feedback.
First Moon Pt. 2
Feel free to read and comment i love any feedback i get as all writers do. have a great day and enjoy. adrian stood still; he heard something. his ears turned to the direction of the sound. the sound came from behind him.
Note To Readers
Early on i was swamped with nothing but positive feedback i doubt it's a long shot to say i raised the bar of what some of you expect from me. thanks of ravens fire, omegafoxer, and shadow688, for the constant votes and feedback.
A Special Night
This is just a test story that i wrote, please leave your feedback! first story, yay ^^ also, if i get enough positive comments, i will continue this story, promise ^^ "welcome home, hun. how was work?"