Dragon Story Ch: 2

feedback greatly appreciated! that's actually the main reason i'm posting this (feedback) so, good, bad, happy, sad, tell me what you think. **chapter 2** the next few days were spent in the forest learning to hunt.

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Adventures in College: Intro

Any feedback or constructive criticism is greatly appreciated and i hope you guys enjoy it^^ if i get mostly positive feedback i will make it a series but i'm pretty busy so the wait may be long between chapters:/ this will be just a short introduction. #

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Wolf Tech 1 - The Beta

Please send me feedback; the more feedback i get the more i publish! i have felt i finished the first story, and the second is also here, as i didn't bother changing it.

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The Sealed Planet: Chapter 10

For one nuoevan they exploited, they need at least three to prevent the feedback to abruptly end their power boost." "so, if we induce this feedback, everyone will be incapacitated?"

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Slate wipe

#3 of the troubled hello hey guys, ive decided to re-wind the story and start with the origin of the main charicter, thanks for the feedback and please continue to read, i should have the new first chapter once i get hooked up in iowa, say, the 26th

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Burning..

Thank you all who read and please feel free to leave feedback

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Brevity of Fire

Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. what burned with passion's flare has fallen to despair. reserves of kindling drained, its energy has waned.

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Stabbed in the Back

Criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated. hello, and good day, my heart you did slay. i loved you, truly, you left me, unruly. you were the love of my life, now a memory of strife.

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Quick update

Also, thanks for all the positive feedback that i seem to be getting.

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Darkness

Please leave feedback to let me know what you think. darkness surrounds apathy abounds life holds no bright light nothing to shine in this endless night.

Prologue to "Feral"

So far the best bit is the prologue, so i punched it into the computer so i could share it for feedback. it's still far from a finished product, but i wanted to get an idea of how well i was doing.

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