feedback greatly appreciated!
that's actually the main reason i'm posting this (feedback) so, good, bad, happy, sad, tell me what you think.
**chapter 2**
the next few days were spent in the forest learning to hunt.
Adventure, Dervacor, Dragon, Fantasy, Flicker, Novel, draft
Any feedback or constructive criticism is greatly appreciated and i hope you guys enjoy it^^ if i get mostly positive feedback i will make it a series but i'm pretty busy so the wait may be long between chapters:/ this will be just a short introduction.
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College, Friendship, German Shepherd, Husky, Intro, M/M, No-Yiff
Please send me feedback; the more feedback i get the more i publish! i have felt i finished the first story, and the second is also here, as i didn't bother changing it.
Fantasy, Mate, Transformation, Werewolf, technology
For one nuoevan they exploited, they need at least three to prevent the feedback to abruptly end their power boost."
"so, if we induce this feedback, everyone will be incapacitated?"
Action, Alien, Anthro, Cat, Death, Drama, Feline, Fight, First Person, Sci-Fi, Slavery, Space, Story Progression, Vyrnian, Wyvern, planet, psychic, space station
#3 of the troubled
hello
hey guys, ive decided to re-wind the story and start with the origin of the main charicter, thanks for the feedback and please continue to read, i should have the new first chapter once i get hooked up in iowa, say, the 26th
New Start, Story Progression
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication.
what burned with passion's flare
has fallen to despair.
reserves of kindling drained,
its energy has waned.
Poem, Poetry
But if you really don't want to do that, leave some feedback on this story if you could-
Action, Adult, Adventure, Alcohol, Alternate Reality, Anthro, Assimilation, Conquest, Dark, Death, Destruction, Disaster, Drama, Dread, Drugs, Emotion, Emotional, Fanfiction, Friendship, Gay, Gay Relationships, Gore, Hansa, Horror, Humans, Idinahui, Intro, Love, Marijuana, Mate, Metro 2033, Mild Romance, Military, New World, Plot Development, Polis, Realistic, Relationships, Romance, Story, Story Progression, Suspense, Third Person, Video Games, Violence, War, Winter, Wolf, Wolves, Yiff, apocalypse, bandits, bloody, furries, gritty, injuries, loss, nuclear, russia, werewolves
Criticism and feedback would be greatly appreciated.
hello, and good day,
my heart you did slay.
i loved you, truly,
you left me, unruly.
you were the love of my life,
now a memory of strife.
Betrayal, Gold, Love, Poem, Poetry, money
Please leave feedback to let me know what you think.
darkness surrounds
apathy abounds
life holds no bright light
nothing to shine in this endless night.
Poem
So far the best bit is the prologue, so i punched it into the computer so i could share it for feedback. it's still far from a finished product, but i wanted to get an idea of how well i was doing.
Bear, Feral