A Long, Dark Road (Part 10)
exposition! motivation! to break a man is easy. one only needs the time and the will. fixing a broken man... now that is another thing entirely.
Laurin tales: JJ's story chapter 1-2
This is going to be a loooong story, and this is just some exposition. just wanna know if anyone would actually read this. it is still unedited, but, seeing as i wrote it on my phone, which has a spell check, it shouldn't have a lot of problems.
Leilani Meets Spiderman
I noticed the glaring exposition in many of these pages." the author laughs. "you mean, like on this page, where someone is saying, 'oh no, a train's coming!' and you can clearly see a train roaring along the tracks?" leilani nods.
Zach - Chapter II
I will do this from time to time, give full on flashbacks into the kitten's past to avoid drowning you in purely dialouge-based exposition. so, anyway, here's chapter 2!
A Pleasant Coming Out
"thank you, mister exposition! what's up with you today?" "if you'd let me finish... you're really fun to hang out with and really... umm... energetic? but sometimes you seem to ignore obvious things i guess." touché.
Digital Prey Chapter 2
I tried to add an adequate amount of introspection, exposition, and action in this chapter, and hope that it addresses some of the issues raised by the readers of chapter one. please read and review, and happy holidays!
Werefox's Dillema- Chapter 11
Though a bit of foreshadowing and exposition while on it. i wake up with the sounds of birds chirping in the distance.
Venom: Beautiful Killers Part 5
The first draft of this part had too much exposition, so i had to cut it down. i don't like dialogue with huge amounts of plot explanations. that's what bad horror movies do.
Nathanriel's Fate- Chapter 5
Now for some of the details since i don't intend on having it exposited much in the story itself.
A boy and a dragon a tail of two friends #2
Wow, alex thought, thanks mini-me that was a lot of exposition you just sprouted forth thanks. no problem it replied.
Hero, Chapter 3 - A Book - old version
Anyway, this chapter was a bit shorter and has a lot of exposition that i needed to move through in order to be able to start pushing my characters into the world.
A Bleak Outlook (Part 1 of 2)
Just a heads up, this story might be a bit out of context if you haven't read the character backstories or setting exposition for tlc, so you might want to do that first, but you might just find the story interesting anyway because things get really gay in