Ander - Part 2: Subchapter 15

A hard elbow to the ribs from his youngest daughter put a stop to any commentary he might have had, and ander was grateful for that. "kiana..." he said. "i can't leave without saying goodbye." "exactly!

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The BBQ

The commentary from the peanut gallery had become more silent, the spectators somewhat stunned now that teddy had the upper hand.

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He Was Different

Looking back, i don't really know if that was the case; i certainly didn't _hear_ any commentary, but i wasn't very accustomed to my shape, then, and somewhat self-conscious.

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Helluva Boss: Is There No Gray in Hell? Part 1

"as if i haven't lived an _entire life_ hearing commentary like yours on my preferences." his tone seemed to match that of his stubbornly but quietly singing on as fizz and his lord verbally pummeled him with suggestions.

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The Weight Of The Situation

#7 of stories contains: shrink (post, not process) and feet/pawplay summary: a tiny victim gives us commentary on her situation. just practice mostly, trying to get back in the swing of things.

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Ch. 14 -- Guild Report

Her commentary paused a moment, as the optics panned across the graves. the older of which included a headstone with the name dolan uwuru, emblazoned with the oroyo crest.

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A Price for Everything pt 4

Then again, the rules of the contest only said that they could be given guidance, not answers or running commentary... then he remembered the harpy and turned his attention back to her. she... wasn't a harpy any more.

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A Failed Duty - Epilogue: 1st Letter - Read me first

Disclaimer: the following will contain homosexual individuals and relationships and may be an interesting commentary on life, death, immortality, god, gods and various religions.

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Luca's Story Ch. 7

"only the funniest commentary comic of all time!" she said, practically bouncing with excitement. "god if only we could go." "well... maybe we can..." zee said, seeing the excitement written in the girls' faces. luca gave him a confused look.

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Cold Blood 12: Interlude

Mars exerted himself to quell the commentary, silencing the concordance, and a number of other _alphas_ joined him. _alpha_ himself just waited. **squabbling children!** _shameful-rebuke_.

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Tales of Zootopia: Billy and Billie

There were once two people in Zootopia by the names of Billie Waters and Billy Walters, both Black Bears, female and male, respectively. They were both incredibly unattractive, but they were both passionate romantics. They fell in love with each other...

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The First Stryke

I'm just an senile old-man who scares little children." and with this last commentary he walked away, leaving the fastbiter alone with his toughts.

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