First Steps: Bullet Proof, I Wish I Was (Chapter Nine Bad Version)
Okay, hello this is Chapter 9 bad version. I'm definitely going to have the ending epilogue a good ending. I'm so not good at writing bad endings. Well here it is anyway, hope you enjoy! M/m stuff apply PS: if everything's out of place and its...
Recovery, Step One
_Hey there. So, this is my first post on... any furry site, really. And in terms of writing, I'm still quite inexperienced so any and all criticisms are appreciated and valued. I'd like to get better as fast as possible._ _This is a clean hurt/comfort...
Recovery, Step Two
You're not supposed to tell someone you love them right after a breakup or they'll think that you're pitying them, you idiot victor! "you don't have to pity me y'know." see? "n-no!"
True love never rust: Part 2 - 14 years later
I wanted to see you again and confirm that you're still well... even after all these years, after our breakup" "i know it's really hard but... you really need to let the past go, stan, it doesn't fit even the slightest in the present.
Odd love story... Chapter 2
"i'm sorry you had to meet my gf i tried to breakup with her but she makes googly eyes at me as if she's about to cry.. see you tonight!" dark said before bounding off "um..." moon sat down and glanced around. " sure, sure.
What Was Broken [13]
I spent that summer getting my shit together and thankfully never had to endure a breakup that bad again." she felt wet fingers touch her chin, very gently, and turned her head with them, her eyes opening once more.
[story] How it ends...
But after the breakup with my ex, this is how i rewrote it. it's mostly just an overview, with some more specific scenes in there that i'd already written. anyway, this is the rewrite i did... tl;dr- the end.
A Most Prized Possession (alternate title: Some Ordinary Guy's Mcdonnell Douglas MD-11 Rollout Ceremony)
The breakup had freed up my time, and i needed a distraction from my sorrow within. randomly going up, and down the roads in my 1969 ford talladega, i most randomly ended up at an aircraft boneyard in arizona.
First Steps: The Way It Is
But hey," he squeezed my arm, "i don't think i'm going to breakup with her. her and i, we're an item." i nodded and game a small smile before turning back to my work. oh taro, why have you done this to me?
A Fox and His Yeena
It was twelve years ago when i had my first breakup. it was the worst feeling i ever had besides death. her name was sheila and she was a cruel mistress for doing what she did.
The Blessing and The Curse - Part 19 & Epilogue
"but yeah, i guess you could say i just had a bit of a messy breakup with someone." we reached the jeep, and the man opened the passenger door for me. "by the way, my name's dan. i live about half a mile away from here. what's your name, sir?"
Corrupted Souls-Chapter One
I was still deeply upset over a recent breakup i had with a lion by the name of sooty brassworth. i thought that it was going to be several months, if not a few years, until i found love again.