The Fool
"that's advice, kid." that soft smile, again. she flips the cards over, one by one, and continues, "advice comes from people, not from cards. and if i'm going to give you advice, you're going to need to tell me what's actually going on."
Two Worlds?
So again please leave some advice and your thoughts i would love that. thank you and see you soon i hope. :3
Second Chance
(( comic project i am working on, basically i'm looking for advice/constructive criticism on the pacing, is this interesting? does it grab your attention? and any advice better writers might be able to give me.
The Dog Hole: Chapter 9 -- Nothing
"that's even worse advice." she pressed her lips and opened the door behind her. "good luck, sir." bebe waited until the door closed behind her fully before cracking a smile.
The Hitchhikers - Fantasy Chapter - Her Worst Idea, EVER!!! (Censored)
Atleast, that was until she went too far with the advice she was given.
Destiny's Burden
I'm a new writer so any advice, support, etc. will be much appreciated! thanks! :d \*my first chap. of my new story. i hope everybody likes it. i'm a new writer so any advice, support, etc. will be much appreciated! thanks! :d.
The Story of My Life Part 4
All of kitty's friends and family sat around, and the ones who had kids were giving her advice and telling her what to expect. the few children were there, were either playing or feeling for the pups' kicks in the expecting mother's belly.
The Assassin's Dark Tales-Chapter V: The Contract
Chuckling at gorgon, swift-knife looked to his argonian brother, who politely waited for gorgon to finish before giving actual advice, "the _marie elena,_ you say?"
The Dawn of a New Age: Trials and Tribulations - Act2/Chapter6
I can, however, still offer advice on the subject. but be aware; my advice is of course all based upon mere speculations, so it may not be of the utmost use." "still, advice is advice." i say as i toss my used cigarette down too.
Phoenix's Story - Chapter Two
No - sara must have been talking to that other trainer, giving him advice for what to do with his wartortle. that made much more sense; obviously any other trainers would want advice from a great trainer like her.
The Path of Honor
For most of his life he had followed grandpa's advice, but in a moment of insanity he had made a very bad decision, and now it was time to rectify the situation to the best of his ability. stale, warm air flowed from the crack, smelling of death.
Wolf Rescue
I won't touch you, but take my advice. just lean back so that your body and float a bit." he'd instruct her easily in his deep voice.