It's Hip To Be Square!
Please enjoy the story and don't be afraid to leave hints in the comments on how i can improve my story writing :) a small creature padded through the newly built marble hall, a small light emitting from the dim torch she held in her paw, the only sounds
Relic Hunters
Note: this is my first attempt at story writing. constructive criticism is welcome. **relic hunters** chapter one: of beginnings... "heads up mate!"
To Be A Slave
I'm really enjoying this story, writing it is...interesting. it's a good challenge, as i realised that having characters do things when they're kept prisoner 24/7 is extremely difficult. i have ideas though. i can see this story going some cool places.
Following the Fleeting Summer
I spent the first half of this story writing in a blind panic. i had the calgary scenes figured out, but had no idea how i was going to write the fight between tommy and english.
College days: Chapter 01: Entering with the left foot.
story writed by: rhynox jamel was calm of earlier discussions, was looking his left hand when hears a cough of the driver, your eyes are led, for a moment, until it.
Starway
_ok, this is my first attempt at story-writing. i want to learn how to do better, so i will gladly read and acknowledge any critique or comments you have._ _this story is dedicated to my wonderful, perfect boyfriend.
Lovin' a Vixen (A Moonlace Story) Chapter 1
One of those things was his ability for story writing, thinking up new ones, and overall knowledge of quiet a lot of them. now for his writing, it wasn't the best, but the fosky was always learning and growing in order to improve and get better.
Forsaken
That was the focus point of her paintings, her story writing. she tried and tried to draw something normal, write a love story; however, in the long run it was futile.
A Chosen Path -- Chapter 10 -- The Day After
I must say, when you have nothing to do all day while house sitting and looking after some pets, the 7 or so hours come in handy when you want to be productive with story writing! i wrote 96% of this in one sitting, so that is always good! hehe!
It's Just a Game
After leaving that damn place i started doing better i was allowed to express my self through art, story writing, and the little gaming i was still able to do with my very limited selection.
Chapter One - Little Black Disk
Chapter three is in the refining works, but as you may or may not have noticed, i haven't had much time for story writing as of late. i'm slowing going through all of my stories and working on them because i'm striving for "emotional realism".
The Legend of Dusty Hollow (Commission for Wes13)
#14 of commissions i spent way too long on this story; writing and restarting it a couple times before i finally got the finished product. i blame two months of farm and museum work. thanks to fa: wes13 for being so patient with me!