The Game's Secret Player

An original title that makes no sense for this! he sighed, his breath leaving quickly as he lied on his back, his translucent wings spread on either side of him.

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Relationships part 3

It makes no sense." rex whispered "whats wrong rex?" "i've been taught that being gay is wrong. its a sin. my parents would kill me if they knew!" rex was feaking out he was hyperventilating. "rex please calm down. rex!"

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Someone to Hold Ch.2

I shall be back with a clean change of clothes, no sense in putting the same sweaty clothes back on after getting all cleaned up!" he turned and jogged quickly across the street and into his house.

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A Furry Love Story - Back to Reality

There is no sense of self. there is no compassion or caring. there is only fighting and it never stops. i wish things would be different, but it's just human nature. animals don't have time to deal with this crap day after day.

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A Dragon's Prayer

In my own belief, it simply makes no sense to me that there should only be one correct path to the creative and loving divinity at the heart of all things, with all other ones being somehow wrong or misguided.

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Transformed Struggles- 5

Which is an infant's mind, regardless of species, would be extremely chaotic with no sense of right or wrong, no sense of anything but impulse. which is extremely dangerous.

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Havana or Hell, part four

I had no sense of my own body size, i could have been an insect or a leviathan, but i knew i would squeeze through that crack and re-enter the human world. with a roar, i was born in that back alley.

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PI Isaac Case #1 chapter 6

It made completely no sense. nothing about this makes no sense. what was the point, they just wanted to trash the school. the only one that may be serious is the death threat i heard from ms. young, 'all fagots will be dead before graduation.'

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Wide Open World Chapter 4: A Son's Diplomacy

They always followed them, even when it made no sense. sometimes, he wondered if his people would be better off that way. sometimes. the brownie rubbed his stomach, and he patted it on the back. "i'm sorry.

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Boy by the Cliff

It made no sense, no sense at all. so liking boys made him weird? so being a bit girly made him a freak? then he'd happily be a freak, even if somewhere inside was screaming he was scared and wanted to be accepted.

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Rising Anew-Chapter 3, part 2-

"well no sense standing around i guess, lets go." she said grumpily. she was not all that sure about this little adventure purrma's letter was sending them on, but she knew she had to stay with narcenac.

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Editing

I will fix sentences that make no sense, move paragraphs around, and correct grammar errors that make me sound like a fifth grader. draft 3 (and beyond): this draft is where i begin to polish my writing.

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