Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
'showing' is taking the same action and presenting it in a more engaging way that describes the experience by providing those actions, thoughts, feelings etc.
The Life of Another - Chapter 21
The refrigerator's cold interior provided a momentary haven but i could see the jar of herring sitting ominously on the shelf in front of me. "uh, hey theresa. i heard kriana, are you looking for this?"
Adventure at NordicFuzzCon 2014
This is actually rather common and it provides a fantastic opportunity to settle into the hotel before everyone else.
The Cohen Loop, Ch 21
With the final pair in attendance, class began for real and the information provided ramped up, not just in pace, but also in complexity.
The Guilded Cage, World Introduction, part 1
Send me a message and i'll provide you a group invite! (warning: chat is nsfw).
Galaxy: part 4
That way you don't have to provide additional fuel for them!"_ "exactly! also, that way you don't have to provide them with heat shields for re-entry and divert more power to the weapons or provide actual shields." _"that's brilliant!"
XCOM 2: Enemy Mine?
Inspired in part by some excellent fan art of vipers, which are provided in the following links below. anyhow, this is just a little idea i had, just wanted to know if people want me to go ahead with this.**
Without Mercy
In turn, this provided a key opening for the federation strategy. the issue was a fundamental one, warfare 101.
Slave Maker 3000
The visor itself provides a constant source of projections directly onto the subject's brain while omnidirectional speakers provide auditory stimulation." the wolf pointed all the parts out to the skunk.
Path of the Lion (Prologue)
His employer had provided him a floor plan of the palace, but he didn't carry it. his mind could recall it clearly from memory.
The Zoo: Prelude
Dulion is not a lawyer, but has been certified by the new jersey bar to provide legal advice. any interference with mr. dulion's job will result in prosecution to the fullest extent of the law.
Leaving Starhold
I provided him a classic dutch rub on his head, just to prove it. back at the front of the shop, heartsinger gave me a chance to set down my coffee before giving me one last hug "for the road."