Macaroni, King of Mudpie
The poodle mentally critiques each dog, actually, he does it out loud, and a doberman tries to poop in his mouth, but he doesn't have it in him, and besides, macaroni needs to discuss plans of taking over the world.
Concept Ideas for a story
It's in the planning stage, so if you have any suggestions, questions, or critique please tell me so that i know just where to improve. here is a quick description of the plot, characters, and the kind of themes and fetishes it might include.
A time before ours.
I don't mind critique if i get it, but if i get a few likes then ill start doing more poems ^_^ thanks guys<3 poem the cold rain from the clouds brought down upon that dismal day, the lambs that fed upon that ground have all but ran away, the trees that grew
To The Blue
As always, critique is appreciated!
A woman's story - A Panda's tale
critique always welcome! chapter 1: a panda's integrity "he's a lazy little shit!"
Of a Time Before
I am always open to critique as long as it is constructive. if you don't play nice, you won't be invited to my tea party. i hope you enjoy.
Ballad of the Otter War
critique is appreciated!
Their Echoes
This is a first and feel free to critique, give feedback and tell me what you think! thank you for checking out this story, i hope you enjoy it. the snow leopard's ears flicked along to the beat to the old clock.
Tracks
Any and all critique is appreciated, just please be respectful. the snow fell quickly enough to cover his tracks just after he made them. he had a sword sheathed on his back and was bundled up in wool to keep warm.
"Wolf Boy" a Fantasy Novel
All feedback and critique are welcome as the story itself is still quite young in its development and will most likely change quite a bit by the time i feel content with it."
Avian: A web serial
So yeah, i hope you all enjoy and please leave your critiques! alright, my first day of writing in this thing... hm, i really can't say that i know what to write.
Pride
critiques would be nice, but refrain from flaming please. even if the sun faded or the sky cracked, or even if the earth shook with such a crushing rage, i will always be with you.