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Everything Or Nothing cap 4 -Questions and Concerns

#5 of everything or nothing its done, phew , comments and critiques are veary welcomed ! :) "so what did you want to talk about, doc?" jorek said whit a raised eyebrow, his tone light and friendly.

Clean, Doctor, Military, No Yiff, Plot Development, Snow Leopard, Story Progression, Story Series, Talk, Tiger

Legal Limits 3: Happy Birthday Conan...

I wish i could talk to you and hear that sweet voice, wish we could watch movies or youtube and critique things as we go along, wish i could hear about your day...

Commentary, Compassion, Controversial, Gay, Gay Relationships, M/M, M/M/M, Male/Male, Passion, Real Life, Short

Pride Shines Through The Grime

Pride Shines Through The Grime ...

Appreciation, Baggage, Life Stories, Military, Poetry, Shifting Views, Soldiers, Veterans, War machine, Was for Veterans Day, country, critique

Unfit Trainer: Chapter 1 part 1

This is only one part of one chapter, but i need some critique before continuing this story. please ask questions and critique my work, so i know what i need to improve on for the next parts.

Foot Fetish, Human, Machoke, Mega Lucario, Pokemon, Training

Its Good To Be Top Dawg (NEW RAUNCHINESS AND EDITS!!!)

I dont need critique, it was rushed just for fun. was feeling horny and getting my fantasy it out on paper was an amazing experience. enjoy!!! now onto alpha hyena bangs bitch fox the room smelled of musk and man. mating and alpha.

Alpha, Balls, Best Friends, Big Dick, Canine, Crotch Sniffing, Cum, Deep Throat, Dick, Fat dick, Feline, First Time, Forced, Fox, Gay, Gym, High School, Hybrid, Hyena, Jockstrap, Lion, Locker Room, M, M/M, Musc, Muscle, Musk, Oral, Orgasm Denial, Plump, Pumped up, Rough, Sheath, Shepskie, Short, Shower, Size, Size Play, bench press, big, deepthroat, experimenting, friends, hung, hunk, masculine, quick, quickie, shepsky, smut, sports, stud, toned, weight lifting, workout

The Tale of Rikama (Working Title)

Constructive critique is both appreciated and encouraged, and vice-versa. our story opens up on korotti prime, named for its first sentient inhabitants. a name which it still carried proudly, unto its desstruction.

Adventure, Alternate Reality, Armageddon, Assimilation, Betrayal, Clone, Conquest, Cyberpunk, Death, Destruction, Disaster, Fight, Fighting, Magic, Military, Mutant, Science, Space, Story Progression, Tribal, Undead, Violence (Not In Yiff), War

Only a Shadow - Chapter One

So if i make a few mistakes, i'd like to see some critique so i can improved.

Character Development, Cub, Domestic Violence, Friendship, Kitten, Play-date, Plot Development, Prologue, Shy

Tales of Torrnal: Chapter 1

Please comment and critique! been a long while since i've written.

Fox, Human, M/F, No-Yiff, Vixen

Wolf Lovers (poem)

Favorites, and again, not my first =) i think this shows how i thought (that's right, not anymore) about my wolf lover a long time ago xd hopefully some of you peoples out there felt/feel like this about your (ex maybe) lover as well ^^ feel free to critique

Love, Poem, Poetry, Wolf

The legend of Tigersight Part I The Begining of the End Prologue

#1 of the legend of tigersight (disclaimer) i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.

Adventure, Alternate Society, Cave, Character Development, Corruption, Cursed, Discipline, Drama, Egypt, Fantasy, Future, New World, Personal Redemption, Plot Development, Prologue, Savior, Soulmates, Story Progression

"Wolf Boy" a Fantasy Novel

All feedback and critique are welcome as the story itself is still quite young in its development and will most likely change quite a bit by the time i feel content with it."

Anthro, Boy, Fantasy, Female, Novel, Transformation, Werewolf, Wolf

Gwen's Test

Comments are good, as are critiques. i know my grammar sucks sometimes, so don't bother critiquing me on that. otherwise, have fun!)

Human, Mild Romance, Neopets, No-Yiff