Ballad of the Otter War

Story by PoeticOtter on SoFurry

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This poem follows the ballad poetic structure, written entirely in iambic pentameter. Some of the rhymes feel forced, but the structure calls for fourteen of the same rhyme, so I had to use a simple word to maximize my options. Nonetheless, I'm glad I made something of a complete narrative here. As before, stressed syllables are in bold for out-loud reading. Critique is appreciated!


A fail ure note d by the first to pen

The rite of pass age known to us as war

The best of batt les make no boys to men

A card we play to face a way from shore

And drown the dogs be fore they can ex plore

There could have been a rea son for the sight

Per haps a si lent curse , for gott en score

We sett le calls of weak ness through the fight

A year went past since the first strike back then

And hope for vic tor y will al ways soar

The ott ers bleed a dog and we take ten

A wa ter wea sel made to feed the corps

We left the pelt to scare them off some more

And now I can not fight the smell of blight

The al pha fell up on his knees and swore

We sett le calls of weak ness through the fight

A cen tur y has gone , we fight a gain

The past re pressed and an y rea son tore

The dogs and ott ers bleed from den to den

My son , he shrieks from night mares of the gore

A rain or two could wash the sin ** be **fore

Now ev ery light's a sha dow of our spite

But we can ne ver lose the ott er war

We sett le calls of weak ness through the fight

To night the reap er's come to my back door

My son will leave to carr y on the plight

Of spe cies kept from the en light'ning store

He'll sett le calls of weak ness through the fight

There Was Once

There was **once** a full **moon** and I **stared** longing **ly** At the **glow** , full of **white** , out of **dark** , I was **free** **Cried** at the **night** but re **main** as a **man** , and I **Turned** on my **heel** , disa **ppeared**...

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Hue and Cry

**An** cient, the **times** , were a **won** derful **view** **Out** of the **dark** , came a **vig** orous **light** **Dra** gons were **gods** of the **world** we all **knew** **Roar** down the **fire** in a **fur** ious **sight** **Re** lics...

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