Writing Tips vol. 4

Thick, acrid smoke, replacing the life giving air and scorching the walls of her throat and lungs. crackles and pops, the sizzle of burning wood, the crash of falling beams, the shrieks of the sirens and the dying...

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Gone and Come Home Ch.1

Despite the rain the night before, now it was scorching hot, and my fur did not do anything to help the temperature, nor did the sky. no clouds in sight, over 100 degrees, and a thick layer of fur easily caused me to overheat.

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The Hunter's Choice Chapter Two: The trial

He did not waste any time undressing himself, his armor was the first to be removed since the scorching double suns beat down on every creature on the planet sharing it's heat to everything, the young blood tired and hot from his trial of passage and the blistering

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Second Sight: Chapter Four: Groundside

Its flesh was scorched red, and instead of eyes, there were thin, vertical slits that revealed pitch black eyes. this was my test. i had to survive a day on the surface; which was filled with demons. i had forgotten that part.

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The Glory of an Empire, A Prelude

Its lush green and cool lands, scorched black with the scares of battle. the crisp green and blue oceans, tainted with the bodies of the fallen.

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CH 27: Nuru’s School Day: Part 5

The lion looked at the small, two-story building, its exterior still scorched from the hyenas' initial invasion. nuru opened the door and went in, shutting the door behind him. "i'm home!", he called out.

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Waking Up the Demon...In Me (chapter 1)

The city lay in ruins, any building that wasn't totally demolished was scorched, but not by fire... "dammit...felona! got any readings?!?" the black cat tapped on a small device. a look of confusion passed over her face.

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The Red Razor

An obnoxious thunder shot from him, cutting a tree in half, piercing completely through a rock, and scorching the ground behind it. "rai..." the false comic book bug gasped. "that, that would have killed him! what are you thinking?!

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Opal's Story - Chapter 6

We know from the fires and scorch marks that we're dealing with some sort of fire pokemon, but there weren't any fires or scorch marks where the gym collapsed inwards- our best guess is that during the fight, one of clamperl's attacks damaged the walls

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Calico Burana: ch.1 - A Cat and a Fox

On his way there, he could feel heat of the sun scorching his mostly snow-white fur. aside from the white fur, a patch of orangish brown around his right eye covered his right ear and a patch of black covered his left ear.

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Tragic Endings

Heat consumed him, his flesh burned as the ground became scorched. it seemed he was planning to go supernova. the ticking time bomb would rather wipe out the realm than be sealed once again.

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Gates to Misery CH: 7

"go to the scorching desert." a voice called out while i was asleep. it wasn't a mean voice or anything, but hearing that out of nowhere scared me. i thought i was imagining it and went to sleep.

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