The Festival of Creation
#4 of fire and shadow:part 1 this is a story that was made by rawg98 of fanfiction .net. he has let me post it here so that he can get some more feedback. so please review.
Out in the country
I really do enjoy constructive feedback, so go ahead, tear my work apart, i'll learn from it.
Spyro: Return of Darkness, Chapter 7 -- Emergence
feedback helps the development of a story.
Wolf's Heart Prologue
(this is my first story any positive feedback would be appreciated. this is a flashback.) a young male wolf sits there alone in the corner of the doorway reading during recess.
Fatherly love
Would appreciate solid feedback so i can make improvements in the near future. if you like what you see then don't hesitate to leave a fav. as for the age of flowers series; i will get back to it once this writer's block passes.
Spyro's Old Flame: Chapter 11 - Precious and Fragile Things
Also, big thanks to shadowwulf and jkbscopes1234 for proof-reading and feedback. as always, the artwork is made by the amazingly talented draktau.
Star Fox: Ascension #08 TERROR
The feedback from the batteries was nominal.
Mew's love Pt.1
Please this is my first story ever i just got an idea and when on from there please show me mistake's and i will fix them and feedback is welcome more will come soon in mew's love pt.2
Only Because I Care ( Part 1 )
feedback is welcome! * * * only because i care by janecat part i putting his jacket on as he pushed the exit doors open, nightwind finally was out of that cramped office building. "thank god my shift is over", he mumbled to himself.
A Dragon for Christmas Part Four: Home Sweet Home
If i get enough positive feedback, i may write out the beginning. but let me know in the comments what you guys want: go back and submit the intro or continue from this point?
Interview with the otherworlder.
I hope it is well enjoyed and look forward to getting feedback. "so let me get this straight. you are not from this world?" the main questioned the humanoid fox once again. "is it that complicated? i'm not from here obviously."
Gotta Catch 'Em All...? (Vore)
Generous feedback is always appreciated!! :d i may have to put this out as a series, ya know, if you guys like my poems and what not.