His Destiny (part 4)
Another part of my fan fiction, constructive feedback is accepted, random comments are accepted too :d
the umbreon got close to us and asked: \
Teenagers (Part 6)
And of course, feedback is greatly appreciated!
Ratchet and Clank: Time After Time (Chapter 4)
Any feedback that you think is helpful will be appreciated - zekay**
Battle in Scarlet Skies - Preview
Please leave feedback and thoughts on this little bit i wrote up in an hour or so, to preview what part of the story might turn out to be like.
His Destiny (part 2)
English is not my 1st language
feedback appreciated
as he said that, a hunter appeared from behind lucky and the i heard mauri shouting: \
Bitterwall Storys - Meeting Sally - III
On the other hand some of my stories have created the most feedback i ever got for my creative works, so that might change, if i keep getting good feedback. part iv will come soon and is already in progress and will contain poooooooorn.
Capsule - Prologue + Chapter 1
Thank you to all the wonderful people who read over and gave me your feedback! please leave feedback in the comments below too!
In the Shadow of Moonlight - Ch. 1
Shout out to dog_girl_kari and aronpuma for reading and providing feedback! i'm always looking to improve my writing and will appreciate any feedback.
Gotta Catch 'Em All...? (Vore)
Generous feedback is always appreciated!! :d i may have to put this out as a series, ya know, if you guys like my poems and what not.
Stay the Horse
Lawton: thank you for your feedback. i may have something else here you will like.
New Days: Chapter I
Any and all feedback is welcome, though keep in mind that this is the first story of this kind that i have worked on. what do you think about it being written in first-person? the details? it has not been spelling or grammar checked, i'm lazy.
Eternity's Sonata
I'm a writer, if that's not already obvious, so i would really appreciate feedback on how i'm doing. i would also appreciate comments that include certain things that you liked or certain things i could improve upon.