His Destiny (part 4)
Another part of my fan fiction, constructive feedback is accepted, random comments are accepted too :d
the umbreon got close to us and asked: \
Teenagers (Part 6)
And of course, feedback is greatly appreciated!
Ratchet and Clank: Time After Time (Chapter 4)
Any feedback that you think is helpful will be appreciated - zekay**
Battle in Scarlet Skies - Preview
Please leave feedback and thoughts on this little bit i wrote up in an hour or so, to preview what part of the story might turn out to be like.
His Destiny (part 2)
English is not my 1st language
feedback appreciated
as he said that, a hunter appeared from behind lucky and the i heard mauri shouting: \
In the Shadow of Moonlight - Ch. 1
Shout out to dog_girl_kari and aronpuma for reading and providing feedback! i'm always looking to improve my writing and will appreciate any feedback.
Bitterwall Storys - Meeting Sally - III
On the other hand some of my stories have created the most feedback i ever got for my creative works, so that might change, if i keep getting good feedback. part iv will come soon and is already in progress and will contain poooooooorn.
Capsule - Prologue + Chapter 1
Thank you to all the wonderful people who read over and gave me your feedback! please leave feedback in the comments below too!
Beloved Wolf Chapter 2
And yeah, it would be nice if you would give me some feedback too. ''ding!'' the lift announced that it was here and ready to go back down to the labs.
Uplink
Normally, when stepping into vr, eli would give himself a good shake and have a stretch, getting used to the subtle difference between the feedback provided through the implant that connected him to the digital reality and the way his actual body felt, but
mercenaries short 2 - an unprofessional diagnosis
#3 of mercenaries some swearing and minor violence after the mysterious events surrounding sooty, mable gives her thoughts on the situation second attempt at writing, first attempt at humour and banter feedback welcome as i'd like to try bigger written projects
Tainted Waters - Concepts & Ideas Part 1: The Setting
Please give me feedback on what to improve/change! it helps! :d enjoy! (also, the picture below has nothing to do with the story, but i though it was... fitting...