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#5 of not so retired any more okay, partial chapter for today - things got busy, sorry. no porn in this one, but be warned of incoming violence. also sweltering, crappy brazilian summer weather. critique is very welcome.
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#8 of not so retired any more hey guys, thanks for reading! sadly, no sex in this one, but i'm tentatively pleased with how it turned out. i'd love to get more critique and comments :) they're like fuel for the creativity engine.
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#15 of not so retired any more chapter xv - funnel descending getting in hadn't been tough.
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#19 of not so retired any more chapter xix - gavin had left the security office a few minutes after he last talked to his boss and psychotic battle-buddy, climbing up through the oversized vent systems used in the hospital.
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#26 of not so retired any more not sure how good my action writing was here. does it keep a good sense of pace and suspense? comments welcome :) criticism is also totally okay.
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#28 of not so retired any more chapter xxviii - debrief, reunion sato goza had gotten the call and immediately made arrangements to fly, despite the discomfort he knew would be the price more so than the money.
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#20 of not so retired any more chapter xx - higher ground aboard the air ambulance, buck laid flat on the gurney, his left leg held up by being braced on arlen's shoulder.
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#11 of not so retired any more chapter xi - cats and mice the last time they'd entered the favela, they'd been on a time limit.
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#24 of not so retired any more chapter xxiv - fire dance it was the deathly silence she gave him that worried tristan the most.
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"there, there princess celestia once you retire from all of this you would be known as a duchess. well, i mean royal duchess of us all."
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~ Gerald squirmed down into the seat as the helmet slid into place, keeping his hand firmly pressed against the authorization pad. The entire assembly of power armor felt like it was trying to rouse itself from its decades long slumber. In the still...
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#25 of not so retired any more warning - warning - warning war is an ugly, awful thing. this chapter involves its effects on people, including children, with all that entails.