The Story of Xion
In being my fault, he made it my task to redo weeks of research in a single day, or my job would be going to someone more competant. i knew exactly who he claimed to be more competant, his own son.
Mystery Savior Ch 5
How long do you think it will take for you to redo your project?" i blinked in surprise. i had expected to at least have to talk him into it for a while before he would give me another week. he's actually letting me decide how much time i need? "um. . .
Wishing for Attention (Minerva Mink TF/TG)
Upon finishing this, she began to redo her makeup, re-applying eyeliner and mascara. as she was, she was completely unaware she was ever a human male named max. she now knew herself as minerva mink, and that's who she always was.
the love of a horse
I just hope this posts on the first try, that would so suck (in a bad way) if i had to redo this. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ dave stenson was always the study type, hence the reason he was
Caught in the Storm: 1 (Redo)
First story people revised, feel free to respond on any suggestions or requests. Names and places are coincidental as they are not intent on reflecting any real-world basis. Looking over this I realized that the first time was hardly worth anyone's...
Lion King : Pride United part 1
._ why thank you so much for reading i did redo this but still comment please
El secreto de Tora: Redo
* * * **el secreto de tora: redo** * * * _oriente, 12:35_ _18 de octubre 2511_ _20 días antes de la muerte de bryce_ se conocía demasiado bien ese techo.
Chapter 1: The Raid
You don't want me to have to redo this." he says as he grabs something that had been resting end first in the firepit.
Welcoming Party
I feel it was a bit rushed, so let me know and i'll come back and redo the bits that need redoing. i've been really out of it when it comes to writing the past day or so, so don't be surprised if this sucks. i keep missing words or entire sentances.
The Photographers Apprentice - Chapter two: Things that go bump in the Night.
If you wanted i could help you redo all of your work." it was a thought, i really didn't have much to do at all, and i really wanted to get to know him a little better.
Asterion Academy Character Sheet 1
I willl be redoing highschool life becasue i got burned out by how the story was going, so if you like it, let em know, i'll just put a version 2 by the new chapters. anyway chapter 7 is on the way so see you next upload.
They Come
When all drafts are here and comments read, i will redo the whole lot and post it up again. it's your choice to read or not to read. there will be mistakes here. it's a draft after all and i appreciate your comments, good or bad.