With Royalty.
_Project Renegade. _ Classified level _Blue_, the code meant for the Doctor's eyes only. Not even Snively knew of its existence. It was designed to be the ultimate war machine in the Empire. From Prow to Stern the...
So Young, So Dear
I would love so critique. a sorta-personal thing... about my dearest childhood friend. she's the best friend i ever had, and she's not that person anymore. she just doesn't know it.
Feyrahl, SF Ch 3.3
"very well... just be gentle on your critique."
Jamie Character Sketch
Yesterday, my friend littlebat posed a weekend writing challenge in a telegram group i'm in, and critique is optional.
The Start
Newer to writing, please provide constructive critique as it helps an artist grow. or let me know if you like it! it was a particularly bitter sweet day, rhajaro felt as though it would never come.
Other people are there for you: Srsly (Get 5 Beta Readers!)
Having people critique your work and edit it for you is, yes, very very handy. but don't make them edit it for you until you've fixed every potential error you can find. asking for ideas is fun, sure, but you need to figure out the shocking truth.
Project Warblade: Chapter 1
Any critique, comments, favorites, or anything else will help greatly. i'll be working on chapter two sometime tomorrow and i'd really love to know how i can improve! and yes, this was imported from my fa.
7:32
Fritz tore down the constricting corridors of Starcruiser-1148, dodging men, machines, and anything else that found itself in his way. The hallways' dim fluorescents tossed just enough light to distinguish objects from shadow, and the small creature...
The Garden
Because of how old it is you're free to post honest opinions about the quality or style, but not any serious critique because i've made steps in different, more serious writing. xd i have no idea what tags to use for this.
Daily Tale 07/24/14: Sick Day
If you could give me feedback and critique i'd love it. also, if you find any grammar or spelling errors please point them out. i also encourage all you furs who are writers or who want to write to try this idea and see how much they improve.
Path of the Lion (Dramatis Personae)
Enjoined #1 - path of the lion okay - so i've had my reservations about uploading this anywhere because the kingdoms enjoined trilogy is something that i really intend to be my magnum opus, but i finally decided that uploading it here and getting some critique
Family Days 14
He would cook something at his house and mary would do the same and then they would switch meals and critique one another: even if at first mary had done nothing but critiqued him.