I Know (poem)

Story by ShadowsBane on SoFurry

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Ok, NOT at all one of my firsts on this, but its still so-so I think =/ one of the few I have on DA (I have a lot actually written down but I just am really self-conscious about things xD) Critique and comment PLEASE! =3

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~I Know

As I walk along these sandy shores,

You're all that's on my mind.

It's funny how there are so many wolves, so many doors,

And out of all of them, only you, did I find.

I grasp for you as do the waves.

But fall too short, and gently recede.

Only to try again. And this, is just how I behave.

But when I'll finally catch you,

I'll look into your eyes

And I'll be swallowed by their gentle hue.

Then, I'll instantly know, there will be no good-byes...

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Ok, second chapter!! =D Hope I got better! Comments and critique wanted!!! Tell me what I don't have but need, have too little of, and have too much of! Thanks ;D Chapter 2 _This feeling...I can't stand it...I feel...so...alone...Kate's there, she...

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What is Love? Ch 1

Okay, this is my first story here, sooo it's not going to be perfect!! :) I accept any comments, and help me do better by suggesting things please!!! :D Also, I'm NOT that good at writing at all, so it's not good, hopefully I can get better...

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