Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 16 - Gluttony
We sat down, but only for a moment. We couldn't afford to waste time, so we formed a quick plan. "Our first priority is to secure the survivor. We will do our best to avoid The Seven" River stated. "Is everyone clear on that matter?" We nodded. The...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 21 - The Fall Of Pride
Here we go! Getting into the taste of longer posts, along with more frequent updates. I'm going to try to post at least twice a week, from here on. These few are to make up for earlier gaps. Anything more than twice a week is just me feeling like...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 18 - A Trip Down Memory Lane
Back again. Longest chapter so far, I think. My girl proof-read this for me (Thank yooou :D) And yes. I know it's a cliché name for a filler chapter, but you'll have to live with it. :D Also, I'm looking for someone who'd be willing to proof-read my...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 12 - How It All Falls Apart
I apologize for the time it took me to post. I have been busy with school work, martial arts and I actually found time for my lady (Yay) I'm going to be posting but it might take some time, since I'm swamped with stuff to do. Also, a completely...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 11 - A New Trick
The rest of the day was pretty smooth. Nothing really happened. Shin and Raven took off on their own, as well as Jack and Lulu. River stuck with me and Iris for a while but he had other things to do, so he left as well. Iris and I were hanging out with...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 3 - Longpoint City
So. This is the chapter, where the plot really kicks in. It's definitely longer than the previous ones. I'd appreciate any help with my writing (Which is far from perfect, I know) So any comments, good or bad, are always welcome. I hope that you find...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 8 - A Fiery Mouse
I get up. Damnit! I fall on back. My head is killing me! I press both hands on the sides of my head and close my eyes, as if that'd help. _Aah damn! What the hell is this?!_ _Relax. Just an after-effect. Just used too much, too fast. Geez, what a...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 7 - A Nightmare In Reality
This chapter took a while... Mostly because it's a bit longer. But. That's about it. If you care to, enjoy the reading! \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ I'm in the black room of my dreams with the familiar figures. Wait... Prothero...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 13 - Fly Baby, Fly!
We moved at a steady pace. Jack was taking a side-route and Raven decided to take up to the roofs. We stayed in visual range of one another, apart from me. I had 'slipped' into a shadow and moved on from there. It seemed, as if nobody could see me this...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 9 - A Day In Town
The elevator ride down was most awkward. Lulu didn't let Raven run down on his own, so we were all cramped up in the small box going down. Jack and Lulu didn't seem to mind. They were closer than ever and neither wanted to back away. River only huffed...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 22 - A Grave Encounter
So (I like that word way too much) as most of you know, I'm not doing all too well. If you haven't read my latest journal entry, I'd ask you to do so. Also, due to the same reason, I would like to make this story more reader-dependant. I have a...
Shadow Of A Doubt - Ch. 23 - A Blast From The Past
Looks like my girlfriend knocked some sense into me, after all this time. I kept on telling her about all these ideas I had for this story, and she told me to get a grip and write. So here I am, writing again. I've missed it, to be honest, and since...