Writing Tips

My usual habit is to use single spaces for small time gaps or action shifts, double spaces for a scene change or larger time lapse, and double spaces with an indent and bolded first word for large time lapses.

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The boy with the Wolf Eyes 2

\*\*\*time lapse\*\*\* i was walking down a cobblestone street beside captain komamura, who was back in his helmet, heading toward shinigami academy. it was a peaceful, pleasant day as we made our way.

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The Boy with the Wolf Eyes 1

\*\*\*time lapse\*\*\* i ran as fast as i could. i chased the ambulances carrying my family away from me, but i was not quick enough.

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Disobedience part 1

"okay now you have a three minute entry time lapse when the guards shift and i can break down the security cams and doors. i'm only going to risk this twice. once to get in and once for an exit." eric's young voice piped through the earpiece.

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Journey to another world pt2 ch69

I was brought out of my time lapse when i heard the sound of a knock at the door behind me. i slowly turned and walked over to the door, only to have it open before i got half way there.

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Looking To The Stars: Episode 03 (Samus Aran)

. \* \* = action and/or stage direction { } = tone of voice [] = sound effects - - = time lapse ( ) = my and the character's thoughts all three: alec, taiga, and kira doing/saying/thinking something in unison thank god for my friend raico for

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Red Moon: Chapter 4

It was like watching a time lapse video except it was happening right before his very eyes. he saw the bones and muscles moving under the skin that began to show and take on the familiar tone and texture of human skin.

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The Serpent Curse - Chapter 10

Australian outback - time-lapse joey travels across the outback, critter scurrying alongside him. intercut with: ext. australian jungle - day the serpent is inside of the jungle.

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Walk A Mile: Covert Ops: Rise of Morgoth

Their horror grew as the image shifted, a time lapse image of fenton cade imprisoned in a transparent plastisteel cylander. they watched as cade faded away and shimmer took his place.

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Chpt 16- War Diaries I

"that would explain the time lapse between shots. where are they?" "center of town near the square." tom nodded. "thanks rainbow." the pegasus gave a salute and took off.

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Antler to Antler - Part 4

Forest clearing - day: bracken watches at the edge of the clearing as the day time-lapses away. bucks continue to fight, walking away with their does.

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