The Homeless Pickpocket vs. the Well-dressed Lady

The challenge is to create a combat scene that introduces or develops a narrative. in this story, a young mongoose fights a middle-aged monkey to get back something that was taken from him.

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Eeveelutions of Time: Chapter #8

Eventually, the jolteon reached quite the distance from the battle scene--still worried as to where umbra was. he didn't think umbra could manage himself in case something bad happened; but even if he thought he did--he wanted to be there to protect him.

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Leaders and Lovers - Chapter 1

Lots of fighting and battle scenes included with packaging. bulletproof vest not included leader and lover chapter 1 "exiting cryo in t-minus ten seconds."

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No Time For Caution

I decided to try my hand at a space-combat scene with ship-to-ship combat to see how well i could manage it. i think i did well, but if you have any pointers please by all means let me know.

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cynderxspyro love n lies ch7

What happened next was so fast, and so unexplainable, that even reading the detailed report, and visiting the battle scene, could not summarize the full events.

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Chapter 24: Hidden Truths

He continued to walk and look at more of the battle scenes depicted on the walls, being in awe at the history of the world he once thought to be so simple.

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Cosmic Stars - Prologue

"i couldn't see at first but then i saw in the sky what looked like a battle scene in a movie! every one was looking up at the sky; i could see other people across the airport looking out the windows. even the workers stopped to watch.

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In Utter Darkness: Chapter 2: It Begins

\<\<\<\>\>\> all right my first attempt at writing a combat scene. sorry, if it sucks but hey that is what comments are for.

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My Unplanned Summer Vacation Ch 7

But all of the sudden, while the action stuff and the battle scenes appears... "hahahahahahahaha! look at the special effects! they're crappy!" hiroyuki was the first to comment. "i can see the 'boom' over there!" kyouji said as he laughed.

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Chapter 5: Training Part 2

This was my first combat scene; i would greatly appreciate some tips from you guys on how to write better ones. see you next chapter!**

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project X (Pt 4)

The sky was a light grey letting beams of sunlight pierce it shining making it a perfect battle scene raining down a few drops drizzling, all of the sudden the sky was split by a lightning bolt and the silence was destroyed by the thunder.

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