The challenge is to create a combat scene that introduces or develops a narrative.
in this story, a young mongoose fights a middle-aged monkey to get back something that was taken from him.
Fight, Herpestine, Mongoose, Monkey, No-Yiff, combat, simian
Eventually, the jolteon reached quite the distance from the battle scene--still worried as to where umbra was. he didn't think umbra could manage himself in case something bad happened; but even if he thought he did--he wanted to be there to protect him.
Canine, Feral, Jolteon, Jolty, Nintendo, Pokemon, Seviper, Story Progression, The Astonishing Antman, Umbra, Umbreon, chansey, eeveelutions, espeon
I decided to try my hand at a space-combat scene with ship-to-ship combat to see how well i could manage it. i think i did well, but if you have any pointers please by all means let me know.
Battle, Clean, Female, Science Fiction, Space, Violence (Not In Yiff), Vixen, Vulpine, War, combat
What happened next was so fast, and so unexplainable, that even reading the detailed report, and visiting the battle scene, could not summarize the full events.
Cynder, Family, Kingdom Hearts, No-Yiff, Spyro, Steam, aurora, clea
He continued to walk and look at more of the battle scenes depicted on the walls, being in awe at the history of the world he once thought to be so simple.
Cynder, Dragon, Humans, Spyro, marines
The yells travelled down the battle scene, reaching their deadly target.
worrel's heart sank at the words he heard.
Aardvark, Abduction, Action, Adventure, Alternate Reality, Alternate Society, Anger, Angst, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Armor, Authority, Battle, Bizarre, Boots, Cave, City, Clean, Dark, Death, Disaster, Dog, Draft Horse, Drama, Dread, Dress, Epic, Equine, Evil, Fantasy, Fight, Gnoll, Harsh, Hate, Insanity, King, Magic, Mammal, Mild Drama, Military, Mountain, Multiple Species, No-Yiff, Non-Anthro, Plot Development, Princess, Queen, Rat, Rebellion, Revenge, Rodent, Sceptre, Short, Short Story, Skaven, Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Suspense, Sword, Tragedy, Trouble, Undead, Uniform, Various Species, Violence, War, Warrior, Weapon, goblin
"i couldn't see at first but then i saw in the sky what looked like a battle scene in a movie! every one was looking up at the sky; i could see other people across the airport looking out the windows. even the workers stopped to watch.
Death, Female, Fire, Muskrat, Prologue, Squirrel, invasion
But all of the sudden, while the action stuff and the battle scenes appears...
"hahahahahahahaha! look at the special effects! they're crappy!" hiroyuki was the first to comment.
"i can see the 'boom' over there!" kyouji said as he laughed.
Bear, Cat, Dragon, Drama, Family, Fanfiction, HumanXFurry, Hurt/Comfort, Husky, Juuichi, Kyouji, Labrador, Lion, Love, M/M, OC, Romance, Shun, Soutarou, Summer, Tanuki, Tiger, Wolf, kounosuke, kouya, morenatsu, shin, tatsuki, torahiko, vacation
This was my first combat scene; i would greatly appreciate some tips from you guys on how to write better ones. see you next chapter!**
Action, Adventure, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Character Development, Family, First Person, Ninja, NinjaWolf, Ninja_Wolf, No-Yiff, Plot Development, Story Series, Violence (Not In Yiff), Wolf
The sky was a light grey letting beams of sunlight pierce it shining making it a perfect battle scene raining down a few drops drizzling, all of the sudden the sky was split by a lightning bolt and the silence was destroyed by the thunder.
War, apoclypse, multi-writer