Torpedo Run Chapter 24
Hi everyone. Not sure how I feel about this chapter. It came out kind of forced, to my mind. Anyway, give me your opinions on it, if you'd be so kind? Thanks for reading! Chapter 24 A Marine brought his bullpup rifle around, ignoring the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 7
Chapter 7 Jenny Greenway groaned softly, each pulse of pounding pain in her skull tinged with growing nausea and an ever-encroaching horrid sense of being conscious again. The cat turned her head to the side, and heaved once, dryly, before a...
Torpedo Run Chapter 20
Comments welcome! Let me know if the story is seeming to drag, or if this is exciting and maintaining your interest :) Thanks. ----------------------------- Chapter 20 With fire whipping up the nose cone of his fighter, Void Shadow prayed to the...
The Furry Dead Chapter XIII - Storms' Eyes
Chapter XIII - Storms' Eyes Captain Summer swiped his left arm across his forehead, and couldn't help but wince as the sliced flesh there felt like it had parted yet more, blood streaming down his face and blinding one eye as he rode pell-mell...
Torpedo Run Chapter 6
Comments, critique, votes, faves, all are welcome! No seriously, tell me if something sounds hinky or awesome or whatever. Your opinion matters! Chapter VI Derry ducked instinctively as someone fired at him from the hatch on a tank's turret....
Torpedo Run Chapter 5
Hey everybody, lots of exciting stuff in this chapter! Please let me know how this is, and for goodness sake vote! The more votes this gets, likely the more readers will look at it. The more readers, the more comments I get, and the better chance I...
Torpedo Run Chapter 14
Chapter 14 Private First Class Daryl 'Derry' Blake rushed through the doorway, head down to avoid the storm of bullets and energy pulses that flew only inches above. The sole of his combat boot whipped out by instinct, and plowed upwards into the...
Torpedo Run Chapter 10
Apologies for the slowness in getting this chapter written. Up until today, I had a bit of writer's block that luckily seems to have gone away. Anyway, please give comments, votes, and whatnot - They really, really help me stay focused on putting out...
Torpedo Run Chapter 21
Comments are extremely welcome. In particular, let me know if the action stays exciting, the characters interesting, and so on. Thanks for reading! Chapter 21 Void Shadow grimaced, in his virtual world, as a near miss almost melted his wing...
Torpedo Run Chapter 4
Chapter IV "What the fuck?" Derry gawped for about half a second, as the army furs opened fire without preamble or warning on an entire crowd of, from what he could tell, unarmed civilians. Then he looked down and to the side, yelling. ...
Torpedo Run Chapter 12
Hi everybody, let me know if you like this chapter. Comments are what keep me going on all of this :D I'm a narcissistic writer, you see, and am fueled largely by praise and adulation or something. Specifically I'd love to get peoples' opinions on how...
Torpedo Run Chapter 13
Comments and votes encouraged. Feed me, Seymore! Enjoy! Chapter 13 "Captain, they've found us!" Captain Leith's dozen floating displays all jolted out of long inactivity, streaming a blinding array of information. The main screen, covering...