Dust
Please give some feedback also a warning this is a rather sad story so back away slowly if you don't want to read something depressing :< (also not sure if the rating for this is correct or not it was a warm summer day and i was 18 at the time i met her,
normal. zero
I thrive on feedback! please let me know what you think!
Hey you
Comments and feedback are highly appreciated. hey you by w. f. albone story and characters © 2013 w. f. albone [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection#e793958e848c9e828986a7808a868e8bc984888a), [![avatar?
Mama
^^ please leave comments, i love feedback! :) a band played music from the wide stage in the grand ball room- filling the the air with the light sounds of the violin, fine touches of the viola, and the deep but gentle bass of the cello.
Change, What The World Needed
Xd anyway let me get some feedback on this please! please do not distribute! blurry images, a fuzzy face surrounded by darkness and light, a muzzle, glasses...images flashing before my eyes...what had happen?
Silver and Bronze: The First Fire
(http://woadedfox.deviantart.com/art/silver-and-bronze-their-last-fight-447778566) remember i am very dyslexic, so feedback, or things to be changed would be very much appreciated. thanks matt. !
Ascenscion Run Rampant...
. ;) this tale is very pliable towards various style/genre fans so i hope people will read it and give feedback. :d ciao - sinfamy _
Adam & Greg 4
#4 of adam & greg it has been a while since i uploaded a story so give me some feedback on how i did the smell of urine fills greg's nose as he shifts his weight in bed he slowly opens his eyes as he rolls over.
Deaths demise (ch1)
That was the first chapter, i know it's short but i'm awaiting feedback so it's better for the reader. thanks for reading and please contact me about improvements)
The Shadows -Intro-
I would love some really constructive critism and some feedback. remember this is only the intro basically just introducing the world i've had in my head for awhile now.
Chapter 12
I hope you like it, don't forget to leave feedback, tell me if i make mistakes, i want this to be a good story, so i've gotta fix the mistakes! can't wait to hear from you all!!
Harper
I always welcome feedback to my work and hope you enjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it. the headlights of passing automobiles threw his shadow against the red brick wall, the dark form growing and shrinking as the vehicles drove by.