The Three Cubs - Part I
Something he regretted seconds later, because it gave willian the feedback he needed. he was getting somewhere.
Escaping the Storm: Part 1
feedback is welcomed/appreciated. **_escaping the storm_** **_part 1_** "come on, what in the gods is taking so long!?"
Inferno High - Chapter 17
Anyways, enjoy, leave feedback, and don't forget that you're awesome! the door opened and a mix of unexpected anthros came in. three of them were otters, as me and alex expected. then two of them came over and were not otters.
A Chance of Showers - Part Five
My brain went into some sort of feedback loop, and the more i thought about what jocks did to me in the past, the more i was afraid of you. by the time y'all were hitting the showers, i was in full-blown panic mode.
The Silent Bell: Chapter One (Teaser)
I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on this chapter, thank you for reading! tarnished metals fascinated me. i turned the silver necklace in my hands and marvelled over its tainted surface. it wasn’t that the tarnish hid potential.
A wolf's first love part 2: A question, a confession, and lunch
Once again i would love any feedback you can give especially if it is constructive and comment, comment, comment. and just as an after thought how is the length of the sections working for you because i can make them longer, shorter or keep them the
Chapter 14
"then i suppose you wont mind if i monitor all of the feedback that telepathy casts off when it's used."
Inferno High - Chapter 19
Anyways, hopefully you can enjoy, leave feedback and... again. sorry it's so short. i awoke with a start. there was a loud trembling sound that seemed to shake the whole room and then it suddenly ended.
Out of Options
#5 of fire and shadow:part 1 this is a story that was made by rawg98 of fanfiction .net. he has let me post it here so that he can get some more feedback. so please review. the festival of creation; i couldn't believe i had never heard of it before!
The Human Species Ch.17 - Forgiveness (Epilogue of Episode III)
While i've got the rest of the story planned out, i kind of need some feedback to adjust the atmosphere accordingly.
The Price of Freedom
\*sighs\* not looking forward to the feedback xd. i kid, being an artist, yeah all i want is feedback. im not confident though. "how much would you be willing to lose? what would it take?
Young Love - Chapter 2
Give me some feedback! =^.^=