Holiday fun
 this is to holiday lurker however when commenting be nice and give criticism if it's something bad like misused punctuation orâ somewhere needs to be tell me nicely like say something like good story overall but bad punctuation dont be rude
Ups and Downs (Rarity version)
In hindsight, it was a very rude action. but at the moment, i was too upset to care. as i retrieved my glasses from the counter, i heard the door creak open.
The Wolf and the SEAL
"now that was rude! i don't think i will tell you my name at all now." she stated firmly as she cast a sideways look of contempt at vissili. "fuck! king! hell! stop being so god-damned difficult.
Soapy Eyes
It's rude to keep people up all night!" she bobbed her head, freeing herself, and groped her way to the sink, hooves going clop-clop on the tile. "at least when _i_ have parties, i invite you.
Destiny With A Dragon - Chapter 10
They where strange and rude, dark and demanding. unlike hiccups people where kind after the constant on slaughter of the dragon race. toothless smiled at how lucky he was to have found someone like hiccup, a friend.
Ander - Part 2: Subchapter 12
How rude!" bethany said, locking the door. "didn't even say goodbye!" "weird," rufio agreed, although ander had the feeling he was commenting on more than sarah's manners.
Being White - Prologue
That night, i was rudely awakened by the shrill sound that hospital machinery makes when there's something _wrong_ mixed along with the most immense pain in my chest my adolescent self had ever felt.
Lupirin: Pain - part 3
It took adrian a moment to settle himself back down after being so rudely grabbed...down there! but--she'd only been teasing after all...and... oh dammit...he was just too tired to care.
Divine: Chapter 5
Lorena was famous for her concoctions that housed ingredients that were highly illegal in the inner ring, but not in the outer reaches where the law was more of a guideline to follow when one didn't want to be rude.
Forbidden Blood 13
One of the foxes, named kurai, decided to make a rude awakening for the white canine in distress. "wake up filthy shit," he shouted as he drenched her with a bucket full of cold water.
The Redeem: Chapter 10
Jason snorted a bit at me, and rudely said "are you really calling him mister? wandered sounds cheesy enough, but adding "mister" to it?" mentally, i blushed at how brash and tactless jason could be.
Kalm High - The New Girl
"not to be rude or anything, but don't you have any other friends?" he said, hoping she wouldn't take it the wrong way. she didn't. "well, i could, but i like you. you're just more friendly and honest than some of the other people here."