The legend of Tigersight Chapter 10
#11 of the legend of tigersight alright if you have read all the chapters this far or just this one i humbly thank you for reading this and hope you like it i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more.
Side Chapter 2: Knowing Your Trueself.
I do accept any comments, critiques, or even curses for those who read the spoiler at the previous chapter. \*yawn\* i am getting very sleepy. nighty-night everyone.
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which a Royal Entrance is Made
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** hours passed. keeping to the side of the road, their trip was eased when a kindly human passing by on a horse-driven wagon agreed to let them hop on the back.
Krystal and Chase: Ronins
Chase gave her a quick hug and then pulled out his handguns, "so, did you come in only to critique my efforts?" "oh, hiigan wanted to see us once you were done." krystal explained, "he didn't say why though."
The making of a book cover - A heresy story
It's difficult to pin down though, since most pieces tend to travel around my friends for critique, que a list of changes.
Splintered Light, Chapter 2.2: Almost Planned Out
This post is now open to questions, considerations, critiques, quandaries, complaints, comments, and all those other wonderful things!
Splintered Light, Chapter 1.3: Facing the Moonrise
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Prologue
Please please please critique!!! the version i am posting is a late revision -- major changes may still occur before it is finalized, whatever that may entail.
Academia - Part 5
A long critique of himself in the mirror showed a satisfying degree of success.
The Fattest Doll of All
Comments and critique appreciated, and enjoy! mystic was enjoying his stroll through the retail district, taking his time to enjoy the birdsong and observe all the varied furs sauntering about as they, too, enjoyed the wonderful weather.
Let The Wind Blow--Chapter 3
Mack talked about her morning class and how her critiques went ("its like...how existential can you get? its a rock for god's sakes!").
Watch Out Australia, Here Comes The Racers
The critiques and the directors falls behind and are currently in a race for last. "we have to move." amy says. "there's no way we're going to win when we're not in first." "i know." hector says. "i'm just wondering how we're going to win this time.