Loonatics Uncut: Series Notes
And so, here's hoping you enjoy the work - comments are eagerly welcomed, both praise and constructive criticism. i've already got the first 'season' of the 'show' planned out, but some edits are undoubtedly going to happen.
Fuzzy Form
And finally, comments and constructive criticism are welcome as always. thanks for reading! **-- fuzzy form --** unblinking eyes greet upon entry, the smirk - perpetual.
Reintroduced to Vulnerability
Haunting memories drive me forward but the amber eyes of rejection do not break the gaze is ever foreboding, always present the nightmarish daydreams concocted small moments that propel volatile imaginations visions that drive emotions into a spiral critical
Poem #60: You
Every part of who you are is what defines you and you should value every piece sometimes you gotta take a step back and take in the whole picture all at once to realize what you are really seeing and it isn't easy to think it's hard to criticize
Teasing the Guard - Story Excerpt
This is the first story i have ever posted here, so you can be critical, just don't tear me to pieces please?
Dragons Never Burn (Prologue Idea)
Constructive criticism is very much appreciated! i'm a dragon. i'm an old dragon, with many things to teach. a dragon without power, or without the power other dragons are born with. i'm a blank slate, i'm neutral, and the future is mine to protect.
The Endless Mind
Also i want criticism, c'mon feed me!)
Chakai OC info
Any advice and constructive criticism welcome. background chakai is an open source ai. available as a free download on a website with hundreds of other ais. the reason there are so many different ais is due to the limitations put on them by law.
Incomplete Life Portrait
Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand what i can approve on. the come to dust and burn down the tower characters in incomplete life portrait are copyrighted to tiberius rings.
Coming Out
Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand where i can approve on. [intro] today's a very cold morning but i'm going to go outside (x4) good day [verse #1] will i lose myself? as i start exploring the outside?
The Council of Species
I am a new writer, obviously, and i need criticism. the council of species is a meeting of many gods in the world of vessel. the gods that come to this meeting each represent a species of mortals living in vessel.
Legend High-Prologue Part One
"yes, but she's in critical condition. you'll have to live with a friend or family memeber 'til she's recovered enough to take care of you." answered the doctor.