Decidophobia - A Prompt 15 of the Writing Prompt Group
This was not a promise of youth restored but of a revised end of life. i felt cheated by time and circumstance.** **"the opening of this nexus does not obey our commands or desires.
Lonely Oak Chapter 16
This revision hopefully conveys the setting with better clarity, if only you may need to look into the terminology.
Corwin Hall, Chapter 16
#23 of corwin hall all right, i was going to make this chapter double-length, but i realized there's a good breaking point about halfway through, so i decided to just revise the first half and make it its own chapter.
Microscope - Chapter 2
We need to revise the plan to get me inside." he looked at his watch. "it's less than an hour before midnight, it is imperative that we are ready before then."
Orwell Tech co
The pit-bull laughed, "i don't only have idea, why am i here with a college assistant who revises my writing? i have a reputation!
Of the Collective, Chapter 2
Consensus needs to be revised. two of the subjects are unavailable, two bodies will not be needed for some time. representative suggests that one of us interview navigator rika fischer while another interviews adham.
Chapter 8
Their spells are the best at what they do; they've been revised over a couple of billion years after all." james led them to the main pillar, stopped, and pulled out his amulet. "what are you doing?" delta asked.
How it Ends.
When i started revising it into a novel, i had a curious idea; to start it with an epilogue, and end it with a prologue. i wanted to start it with the end of khaesho's life in naghant, and end it with a prologue for what new stories could yet come.
Loneliness Can Be Hard 06: Trust
"but we haven't revised anything yet?" jason looked confused. 'revised?' sam thought. he remembered what marty had told him. "you have a point there... how about tomorrow, at lunch again? this time i promise i won't run away. is that okay with you?"
"The Thin Line," Part CC
No objections as to revised issue. please advise when issue made. /s/ lt. riggs, paymaster, 37thregiment._ _ _ _ to: lt. s. kedgeay, mossford garrison.
"The Thin Line," Part M
Out came the scissors, and i began to take apart the master map and attach the revised map-pieces.
Giving Love a Helping Hoof
It's my goal to get this featured on eqd and i think i might need a bit of revision before that can happen. edit: alright, here it is ladies and gents, a redo of the seduction of harmony.