Decidophobia - A Submision for Prompt 15 of the Writing Prompt Group
This was not a promise of youth restored but of a revised end of life. i felt cheated by time and circumstance.** **"the opening of this nexus does not obey our commands or desires.
Decidophobia - A Prompt 15 of the Writing Prompt Group
This was not a promise of youth restored but of a revised end of life. i felt cheated by time and circumstance.** **"the opening of this nexus does not obey our commands or desires.
Lonely Oak Chapter 16
This revision hopefully conveys the setting with better clarity, if only you may need to look into the terminology.
Corwin Hall, Chapter 16
#23 of corwin hall all right, i was going to make this chapter double-length, but i realized there's a good breaking point about halfway through, so i decided to just revise the first half and make it its own chapter.
Chapter 8
Their spells are the best at what they do; they've been revised over a couple of billion years after all." james led them to the main pillar, stopped, and pulled out his amulet. "what are you doing?" delta asked.
How it Ends.
When i started revising it into a novel, i had a curious idea; to start it with an epilogue, and end it with a prologue. i wanted to start it with the end of khaesho's life in naghant, and end it with a prologue for what new stories could yet come.
Microscope - Chapter 2
We need to revise the plan to get me inside." he looked at his watch. "it's less than an hour before midnight, it is imperative that we are ready before then."
Orwell Tech co
The pit-bull laughed, "i don't only have idea, why am i here with a college assistant who revises my writing? i have a reputation!
Loneliness Can Be Hard 06: Trust
"but we haven't revised anything yet?" jason looked confused. 'revised?' sam thought. he remembered what marty had told him. "you have a point there... how about tomorrow, at lunch again? this time i promise i won't run away. is that okay with you?"
Zappy Zaps, Zappy Zapped
They were going to have to rely on the classic scientific method of guess, test and revise till they found a way to put this thing in reverse mode. after studying wires for a bit, nait noticed two wires were bigger than others.
Forging Bonds-Chapter 4: Placement Exam
Looking at the clock when i neared the end of the exam, i realized that i still had time remaining, so i went back over to the questions i believed to know the answer after working them out, namely some of the derivatives and revising passages.
Willem and Rolf - The Revolt at Castle Minas
I did my best with this one and revised it a bunch of times and obsessed over it and i'm still not sure how i feel about it. but, it's a state that tells the little story i wanted to tell!