August 4: At the Kuri Hardware Shop
Oh on a side note, please feel free to rate my works and give feedback. it helps a lot and it's much appreciated :) kounosuke called last night about the fan.
Dystopian New York.
.** **now here's a note, i"m only posting this segment to get feedback on my writing skills. so i would like to hear what you thought and constructive criticism is welcomed. i would love to know how to improve my writing.
Maybe I'm the one...
I think i did myself proud on this, please give me any feedback that you might think that would assist my writing skills. leave a rate or a fave, it pushes me to keep going! oh, and hope you, dear reader and travis, have fun...'
Chapter 10
And for some reason it seems like a good chapter to gain some feedback on, so if there's any questions or comments about the story feel free to ask.
Daily Tale 07/24/14: Sick Day
If you could give me feedback and critique i'd love it. also, if you find any grammar or spelling errors please point them out. i also encourage all you furs who are writers or who want to write to try this idea and see how much they improve.
Grandpa's Stories 1
I'd like to hear some feedback first on this before i decided to work on a series. k thx bai. :3 === grandpa, i have a question. hm? yes, what is, my boy? where do babies come from? huh? your mom and dad never told you?
Death's Master. Chapter One. (Terror's of War.)
.-\_ \*\*comment's, feedback, suggestions, anything is welcome. as long as you don't troll on my story. \>\_\<\*\*
Lackadaisy: Missing Linkage - Excerpt
feedback is welcome, but please keep in mind that this was done specificailly for the clinic; it's not really supposed to be a "finished" work. ============ "that's your final answer then, viktor?"
Team Argos, Book 1: The Unveiling Prologue
I hope to get some feedback on what you think. **team argos** **book 1: the unveiling** **prologue** **by: jear77** the meteorite changed everything. scientists should have known something was off; days before there were all sorts of signs.
Prologue: Minraya
* * * **so yeah i have decided start my path as a writer making some little stories about war, don't worry thought i am don't too edgy, please leave your comments with feedback and critique so i can make better writing in the future**. **thanks!
Getting By, Intro (Short Story Series)
feedback is always welcome be it positive or negative. thank you to those of you who take the time to read it, hope you enjoy.
Small descriptive story (creative writing college work)
#1 of small storys, clean works this story was a part of my college work but like my last story i will post it online so others may see it and give constructive feedback.