Memories
This is kind of new for me so in feedback for me. and try to guess what i'm trying to describe if you think you can get it. i'm sure if you can you can see it in your mind right now. seemed like it was forever ago doesn't it?
The night of dragons
Any kind of feedback is really appreciated <3 it's been a long, hot day. the sun had already set behind the western cliffs from hours but the warm air that still blew across all the valley kept the temperature high.
The Beginning (Preview)
Let me know how you guys like it, with feedback really helping me out. took a break from writing for a while and needed to know if my skill has dwindled, or needs some polishing. hope you guys enjoy it! "has it been six months already?"
Chapter 10
And for some reason it seems like a good chapter to gain some feedback on, so if there's any questions or comments about the story feel free to ask.
Daily Tale 07/24/14: Sick Day
If you could give me feedback and critique i'd love it. also, if you find any grammar or spelling errors please point them out. i also encourage all you furs who are writers or who want to write to try this idea and see how much they improve.
Grandpa's Stories 1
I'd like to hear some feedback first on this before i decided to work on a series. k thx bai. :3 === grandpa, i have a question. hm? yes, what is, my boy? where do babies come from? huh? your mom and dad never told you?
Death's Master. Chapter One. (Terror's of War.)
.-\_ \*\*comment's, feedback, suggestions, anything is welcome. as long as you don't troll on my story. \>\_\<\*\*
Lackadaisy: Missing Linkage - Excerpt
feedback is welcome, but please keep in mind that this was done specificailly for the clinic; it's not really supposed to be a "finished" work. ============ "that's your final answer then, viktor?"
Team Argos, Book 1: The Unveiling Prologue
I hope to get some feedback on what you think. **team argos** **book 1: the unveiling** **prologue** **by: jear77** the meteorite changed everything. scientists should have known something was off; days before there were all sorts of signs.
Demons and Data: Part 01
Either way, read, and please provide feedback. "her throat bloated as a thick glop of saliva forced its way down. her face sparkled as each drop of sweat reflected the brilliant sunlight.
Luke (chap. 3)- bliss
Also, i would still love to hear any feedback so i can make the next story better (i've posted a preview of chapter four in my journals if anyone wants a quick preview)
Chapter 5
So remember to leave feedback and keep in mind this is setting up something bigger. so it might be a little slow, but i hope you enjoy! chapter 5 about two weeks later i woke up feeling great.