Request: The baby-maker.
It's a common error! just check the wiring to the screen if you see anything!" i shrugged and closed the door, checking the goggles twice. it seemed to function as hud rather than screen, like most fps machines. "flickering lights... buh...
Lessons In Happiness - Prelude
If i have any errors here, grammatically or spelling, or just got something wrong with one of the characters, please let me know so i can fix it and improve.
Nada de promesas de amor eterno
--le cuestiona daniel-- ¿olvidarás los cinco años que han pasado juntos, solo por un error? --no es tan fácil cumplir esta clase de promesas daniel. james se aleja del grupo y se va a encerrar a su habitación.
Bolt x Angel
. ^\_^ please point out any errors i missed thank you.
Gap Year: The Morning After
Over at h&m, jake handed me a stack of pants to try and after trial and error, we found a good pair and were about to be on our way when jake went into the changing room with me. he sat me on the bench and straddled me.
Ander - Part 3: Subchapter 12
Making a gravestone for her would be a colossal error on his part, but he couldn't just leave her to rot down there without leaving at least _some_ kind of marker.
- Celesteon, the Apprentice of Light - Prologue Part 1
This is the first story i have ever written, so i can understand that there might be some grammatical errors and spelling issues as well as some repetition. please comment and tell me what could be worked on.
Splintered Light, Ch 10.1: Second Place Is...
The scientific way encourages all ideas, as the best way to test a theory is through trial and error." willem snorted. "error on the sea can leave a ship fathoms under it."
Intermission: Japan to France
Through trial and error, the two wonders began teaching the new kitsune how to use her powers. it was not the same as the powers of a true wonder, like themselves, but it was still remarkably useful.
Curiosity Inquired (Otherwise Untitled)
~ clip shrugged her shoulders, "factory error?"
A Furry Beginning
I am very new at this, as such this story will be full of grammatical errors, run on sentences, and probably switching back and forth between tenses just to name a few.
Stained Purity Chapter 10
Sorry for any grammatical errors anywhere, and please tell me about them thanks, im from sweden. but there shall not be to many, as i am more often than not complimented on my near perfect english.