The Lead Crown: Ch 8.4a, Rude Awakenings
The floor is now open for questions, comments, and critiques! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 8.4, rude awakenings princess noriene held her own council as the party made its way through the sewers.
The legend of Tigersight Part II Power Overwhelming Chapter 9
#10 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
Deaths demise (ch1)
I've not tried anything like this before so any constructive critique ia appreciated, please enjoy) "i had a wonderful dream last night, a man stabs me for an empty wallet and receives instead a bullet" dale lay there thinking of the wonderful dream until
Just a test run!
Friends are welcome to critique. _do do doo do, do doo dooo do do doooo.._ i woke up to the familiar, light tune of a game soundtrack; remixed to be slow and jazzy, and appropriate for an alarm. though, i did so with a rather groggy, tired groan.
Trollhunters Part 2 Review
I mention this as it leads to a critique for season 2. i waited up to watch season 2 (or part 2, as netflix categorized it as), and repeated the all night binge i had done with the previous season.
Ballad of the Otter War
critique is appreciated!
A Night of Regrets
Brutally honest comments, critiques and tips are all welcome and encouraged. i watched my friend pace around the room like a caged beast. his brown fur was unkempt, wild and ragged.
In Real Life
Feel free to comment or critique! warning: dark content-not a 'fun' story. steven sat at the desk in his room. it was so late, it was about to become early.
Dragon Story Ch: 3
Please comment and critique if you have any suggestions or even just like it! :d i will be releasing at least a chapter a week! **chapter 3** the day had passed slowly, dervacor was sitting on a rock outside flicker's cave.
Canvas and Melody - Prologue
I intend to do daily uploads until this story is finished, any and all comments and critiques are welcome!
Umbro the Legendary Umbreon Chapter 1
Please critique me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a tragic loss so many pokemon live throughout the vast world.
The legend of Tigersight Chapter 5
#6 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.