The Plains- Chapter 1: The Beginning
#1 of the plains this is my first story that i have written in a long time and i plan to make into a chapter story so i may share my work in between sections of writing so i can get critique as well as friendly feedback.
August 5: At the Ooshima Inn
And finally, a genuine critique from someone that's not dad!" "who else tastes what you cook?" "tatsu-nii." tora scratched his head. "and he ain't exactly the best judge of things, washing everything down with alcohol."
Fire
In other words, no critiques, because i already know it's terrible. also, i'm leaving all the naughty stuff up to your imagination~_
Starway
I want to learn how to do better, so i will gladly read and acknowledge any critique or comments you have._ _this story is dedicated to my wonderful, perfect boyfriend. without him, i would still be hanging off of a cliff by one finger, or worse.
The Maryville Amazing Maize Maze
More than anything she was curious about the exact mystical nature of the labyrinth, if for no other reason than to critique it. it obviously had a temporal distortion quality to it. she didn't know how long she had been walking or how far.
Jeremy 015; A Cause For Concern
He sat down with jeremy and critiqued his performance as they watched each version. at the end of an hour he suggested jeremy was ready to join one of the regular sessions.
Dal Segno
I also know that we're all somewhat sensitive so i try to be as kind and tactful as possible when it comes to my critiques and i always tell her what she played well to counter any negativity.
The Red Tiger Chapter 3
Be sure to leave a comment and critique if you enjoyed it! please and thank you!
Gnoll Brigand: The Adventure (Prologue I)
Suggestions, critique, and voting go into the comments section. also, the next entry's formatting won't be as sloppy. **prologue i: background** you are a gnoll (that's fantasy-speak for "hyena monster").
The legend of Tigersight Chapter 6
#7 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
The legend of Tigersight Chapter 5
#6 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
The Stone- Chapter 4
Please; comment, rate, critique, anything!