Countdown to a New Chapter
, their beliefs others who supported their friends and provided relief we all have our books, the novels ever being written of our lives and even of the lovers to which we were smitten though some chose to live alone, it did not diminish the critical
Forgotten Ch. 2
Coments and criticism please and thank youz =] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- my mind was dazed and i couldn't help but keep my thoughts focused on him. my only desire then was to be with him
Hope
Many problems arise from the pit always questioning always judging always so convincingly strong those same problems grow louder always pressing always coercive always deceiving they grow so loud; they enter into your head always critical
Finding Guawysvern
_ _the demon grimaced, his expression hidden by a dark shadow from his long bangs, the thick fabric of the gag in his mouth silencing him from responding to any of the words being spoken by his siblings, the group criticizing him for a crime that was worthy
Under The Blazing Sun (Chapter 1)
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The Red-Ringed Umbreon part 3
"i could tell," he stands up, "but that not for me to criticize, the sun will be up in an hour, and we should get moving. the closest village is the one we should head for."
Her Peculiar Appendage
Then turned her head to address her critic. but not enough to take her eyes off the intruders. "not now, dammit! we have company!" the arrow-scaled extremity was quite adamant. _"hiiissssss!"_ jocasta crossed her hands.
Ekain's biography
Skills: - his tattoo increases his physical stamina by 10% in critical condition.
To Laugh Once More
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Wander over Yonder: The Frozen Princess
"_artificial intelligence systems are... critically damaged._" the voice didn't sound all that intelligent to sylvia. she assumed that the "critical damage" had caused the ships intelligence to be... well... less than intelligent.
Vietnam Goldfish Hunt
The critics and publishers willingly share a boat like the twins did. "i have an idea." patricia says. "three of us get in the water and one keeps watch of our stash." "i'll do it." eddy says. "good.
Tactical Alliance of Intergalactic Life
This theory is heavily criticized however but the critics admit that they cannot come up with a more convincing theory to replace the fragmented asteroid theory.