Just a project
Any criticism would be much appreciated may go into more details later on but yes... tell me what you think and if you would like to see this continued "let's go over this again." said the rugged slightly gruff sounding doberman police officer who
Inner Struggle-prologue
#3 of inner struggle #### ** warning:** _ this is my first story written in forever so take it easy on the criticism this story contains romantic situations between gay anthropomorphic fictional characters, and if you don't recommend this to
A Human Outta Place
Light criticism is allowed to help me improve.** * * * chapter 1: not on earth in the city of new york there was a 16 year old boy walking through its busy streets his name was ykerum hatake.
Legend of the Gladiator: Prologue
If you have any commentary or critic, please go ahead and put it in the comments. anything said can only help. for now though, enjoy this short prologue to a long story.
The Journey: Prologue
**and so the prologue ends, let me know what you think, any constructive criticism is welcome :)**
Lost Cause Ch. 2
I forgot to say in the first chapter but if you wouldn't mind please post your comments and criticism thank you ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Crymson Fira
* * * comments, opinions, kind criticism would be greatly appreciated. i haven't ever written something apparently very detailed ever since i started writing.
The Life of a Lost Dream
The life of a lost dream ch.1 the companions authors note: this is my first story so any and all tips, criticism, and faves will be appreciated and taken into account.
Lore- Energies of the body
They're not critical to the story so you can skip any whose title starts with "lore" am working on the fourth chapter now, it may be up later tonight \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_
Gleaming Gold
Any thoughts or constructive criticism is welcome! * * * how did gold become so wicked? so evil and impure? what was it that tainted their hearts? made them arrogant but with such allure?
The Last Game of the Master Domino Player
Nbsp; the wise old domino master, he watches the opponent make the first move starting off with an average double three from the opponent they both settle into the game's slow, methodical groove both of them making strategies and trying to reach that critical
Tales of Zootopia: Wynn
Wynn got restorative treatment to take back what was stolen from them by their parents (foreskin, because all science ever says it's important), and wynn and georges willstein-halcyon wrote three trilogies of novels, all of which received massive critical