Chapter 15: S. O. S.! Virus Evolution.
Al got a critical hit from the angemon and altered all of his status, levels and skills; he didn't realize it because he was knocked out.
Stuck Forever
The lab was gone and people got injured to a critical point. everyone there became suited up. they tracked me and armed my suit so that i could never get out of it with an invisible seal. they took the tracker out and deleted it's data.
Torpedo Run - Chapter 1 (Revised) and 2
Space is a dangerous place, and everyone's eyes and ears are critical. you see something wrong, out of place, or strange, you tell me immediately.
A Tale of Two Tails (Intro)
#1 of a tale of two tails i've written things before but this is my first furry story so please any criticisms would really be appreciated :3 (intro) _"i'm gay."_ i thought to myself with a sudden realisation.
Epilogue
Despite almost fifty injured, and over twenty in critical condition, all survived. alex was one of the last ones to be let out of the hospital. but when he was, he wasn't dispirited or even humbled.
Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Out of the Dark
Meanwhile, a deadly threat for the ship manifests itself as one of its fusion reactors approaches a critical overload. ## chapter 2 adrift in a sea of stars per aspera ad astra.
Mickey Mouse in the Public Domain - Chapter 11
Felix asked critically. "public domain, aren't we? everywhere is my jurisdiction." "i'm not sure that's how that works," felix said, "technically, copyright oughtn't be within your jurisdict-" "enough!"
Anima World Part 1
critics and comments are welcome. by the year 2025, the world as we know it has ended... while it is not a sudden event, the whole eventful year had been a gradual process which started unexpectedly since the year 2012.
Marla Chapter 7 - Music Box Dancer
Marla knew that regardless of whatever else happened tonight her pack mates would always support her and would never criticize her performance.
Chapter 1: Snapshot
Hope people like it, please feel free to leave any comments or criticism below! chapter 1: snapshot jason felt the crunch of freshly fallen leaves under his shoes and smiled to himself.
Inhuman | Chapter 15: Resolutions [old edition]
Any criticism you have, share it! seriously, nitpicking is _encouraged_.
Change in the Winds
"at the end of our duel, he told me that i had made a critical mistake. i see now. i entered battle without learning of my opponent. erhardt identified where i came from, my stance, even how i held my blade.