Prologue
The version i am posting is a late revision -- major changes may still occur before it is finalized, whatever that may entail.
MagnaFlame Renamon part 1
((this story is now revised)) damn that hurt. that guy sure knows how to throw a punch, but i'm getting head of myself.
The Pillow Book of Sethira: Entry Two
**a/n:** last revised 3/11/2023 for grammar. * * * i mentioned a meeting in my last entry. this is because a while ago, andarria had told me she wanted to set one up.
A Warrior's Heart, Chapter 15
She knew her way around the ferret and the sisko was a similar model, though a few revisions newer. while they were both middle aged by starship standards, there was still plenty of life left in both of them.
A Writing Study: Frontier Psychiatrist
(https://creative.oldpines.wtf/library/fiction/short_fiction/the-valley/) his prompt for me was to write 1,500 words (which i revised downward to 1,100) on [frontier psychiatrist.](https://www.youtube.com/watch?
Phil's Bebopin' experience
Seems the 3d glasses will have to be revised before showing to new patrons. as for phil himself... "i feel really good!
Chapter 3 - The Mark Of Courage (Revised)
"Kaly? What happened?" I asked and she pointed her finger behind me as I look behind. "Who are you?" An enormous Charizard behind me start to ask. "And what are you doing with my daughter?" "Your daughter?" I asked back. "Yes my daughter." He...
"The Gift": Richard's (SF) Storyline, Ch 4, Part 2
If i'd thought about it a little more at the time i might have revised what i said next. once there was a break in the conversation i turned to the wolves. "hey...
Day at the Park
Perhaps you need to revise your security procedures if a man can enter the park with a firearm.” she stepped past the man and to ghost, “are you okay?” “i'm fine. no different than ever.”
Nature and Manufacture (Chapter 2 - Gates and Legalities)
Like a fog in the twilight silence, her pen a ship's mast, drifting studiously through documents on a journey to discover any displeasing deviations; single mistakes were identified and circled in red then placed the 'return to sender' box to be revised
Just Do It
* * * i'm still not as pleased with this one as the last one; i revised this a lot, but it just didn't come out quite the way i wanted. but, there were moments i liked, and plenty of plot development.
Thane of Hearts, Parts Two (and Part one, revised)
This upload contains a revised part one and the whole new part two 30 pages, 6000 words; viking-age history/fantasy tale. part one _to battle!