The Ghost
Cause and effect can be reversed, revised and manipulated to your bidding." booker grinned, extracting the last of the ghost. there was nothing left to atmosphere of the hallway as booker closed a lid over the pot.
Chasing the Sun - Chapter 02: An Honest Step towards Lies
Maybe i'll revise this chapter in the future._
After the Storm - Part 25 [Catching Up]
But i decided to upload it as it is since it might take me a week to get the inspiration to revise it.notenote: my tagging's just horrible today... "hey there, jason." the charmeleon chuckled as he approached the riolu.
Lion heart
#2 of pokemon story lion heart (had this one revised ahead of time. enjoy :) ) walking through route 32, leo could already see signs of max and his group walking down this path and knew he was headed in the right direction.
The Anaris Saga - Chapter 1: Saren
He quickly revised his earlier estimate as he realised there was only enough for another half year, maybe less. he replaced the bag and slid the panel closed. then reached up to the top shelf and grabbed the long, thin, wrapped bundle sitting there.
Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 1 - The Last Horse (Revised Edition)
#1 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) valkyrie book 1 - fate and rebirth prologue alexandrian computer bank accessed.... subject: terran history play log...
My Teacher got into my pants 1
Here is the revised version
Chasing the Sun - Chapter 44: They Whose Blood Does Not Flow
"third revision file for operation red wolf 2. signora lucia wants us to study it before coming to the next meeting." richard took it and stared at it. "did you read it, oliver?" "...no." the ibex slumped on the desk.
Through The Pass - Part 1
I'm cheating a little bit here, as most of it is already done: i just made sure the tense was consistent, added a page, and revised some of it.
Ch. 8 -- Whats Cooking
Verifying that his star charts were the latest revision, and noting any new territories that had been added since the last update, were one of his few entertainments. once back in space, he would have things to keep himself busy again.
The Wolf
Now that i'm in high school, it's always super hectic since i'm revising almost every hour of the day. if i let my grades fall, my scholarship may be retracted, and no way am i going to let mom work extra hours just for my studies.
Splintered Light, Ch 2.4: Unforeseen Circumstances
"i'm certain they have everything perfectly--" captain jacksoni ascended the stairs to the poop deck and tobias quickly revised his choice of words, feeling ill-at-ease about using a pet name with someone else around. "--perfectly in hand...