Those Bygone Dog-Star Days - Chapter 28 of 37
That's also being revised, mr. hughes said." i sat there, eating my dinner and trying to act disinterested - insurance policies, et-cetra, boring stuff. i choked down some water and played with my food.
Just Do It
* * * i'm still not as pleased with this one as the last one; i revised this a lot, but it just didn't come out quite the way i wanted. but, there were moments i liked, and plenty of plot development.
Breadcrumbs (Book7, chapter11)
I write it, i post it... and then later i'll revise it and repost the revisions just like i did with book1 and such. if it seems a little more rough around the edges, or the dialogues seem to drone on a bit... well that is why. it's all rough.
War's Oversight - Chapter 03
Nowadays, anything sent to the logistics department under the heading "requisition" was likely to get the revised 'ok3.' or rather, ok3. _okay, okay, okay!
To Love
Unlike most of my older things, i haven't revised it much since i wrote it, so the quality might be somewhat lower than my other stories (it was during my thick-chokey-inundation-of-description phase).
Chasing the Sun - Chapter 44: They Whose Blood Does Not Flow
"third revision file for operation red wolf 2. signora lucia wants us to study it before coming to the next meeting." richard took it and stared at it. "did you read it, oliver?" "...no." the ibex slumped on the desk.
Chapter 3 - The Mark Of Courage (Revised)
"Kaly? What happened?" I asked and she pointed her finger behind me as I look behind. "Who are you?" An enormous Charizard behind me start to ask. "And what are you doing with my daughter?" "Your daughter?" I asked back. "Yes my daughter." He...
Character Descriptions
If and when more main characters are added, this will be revised.** **edit 7/15/2013: added jack and ted.** **edit 7/24/2013: added leon.** **edit 7/25/2013: added bullet, manny, sam, vince, timon, zach, nicky, and kota** **edit 7/30/2013: added
Resident Furry: The Beginning ( Revised)
Resident furry: the beginning (revised) story & characters michael .b ( max the wolf [ys] lt\_max\_w\_charger [fa]) resident evil ref. capcom (although i didn't use much of the game for reference.)
Oueti Tale Of The Forged Part 1
This is a revised version of my story i had uploaded earlier this week. hope you enjoy! _i awake. i feel the blinding light in my eyes, "this stinks", i say._ _when i feel the cold metal against my fur, i get a shivering thought, "where am i?"
A Vow to the Sun
Chances are i'll be revising this as i think of some new bits, but i'll be sure to let you know when i do. thank you for playing, matt, the z-byte
Chasing the Sun - Chapter 02: An Honest Step towards Lies
Maybe i'll revise this chapter in the future._