Shadowed Confessions
Would really appreciate feedback. trapped in an endless cycle of excuses and answers, waiting for the one day when it will all be over. looking up at the night sky, searching for the one answer i'm really looking for.
The Last Mission.
#1 of stories based on imagination, written by sadness. feedback would be greatly appreciated.
An Interview with Toumal: The SoFurry Search Function
You can see our efforts in the forum, and we will definitely do a public beta of the new interface, so there's plenty of time to give feedback! **heuvadoches:** well, thank you very much, toumal. we do appreciate these updates from time to time.
Prologue (Unnamed series)
And feel free to give any helpful feedback. ^^ prologue **15 years ago.** _chaos. chaos everywhere._ _dragons screaming._ _a hive on fire._ _the queen gone._ no one knew what to do. their minds were all awash with abject terror.
Miharra's Battle
I like to write and i want to improve so i'd really appreciate any feedback given.
Adventures in College: Chapter Two
Thank you to all my watchers and any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Chapter VIII: Return of the Master
"if this keeps going on the feedback loop might explode, and if the wires are too strong this might take out the whole county and cause thousands of years of ecological damage."
Zistopia: Inner City Blues Chapter 12
I've gotten no negative or positive feedback, and my story is now getting much too far from theirs! i hope they'd like my stuff, though!)
Rex Chapter 1
**_this is my first story on here and i know it is kinda short but i have another chapter mostly finished so hopefully i can get that out soon if you have any feedback please tell me in the comments.
Terror in a World of Murky Puddles
A recent idea that compelled me to write a short blurb, please do give me your feedback! i will definitely be adding to this as time goes on. "fucking piss..."
Juryokine: Epilogue
Give me some feedback in the comments! and, as always, if you feel like doing me a favor, you can buy the book on amazon in print or on kindle. what's coming up next, you ask?
Editing
If i am writing a professional novel with 150,000 words and my reputation is on the line, then i will have 10 drafts, send the story to friends & family for feedback, and then i will send it to another professional who will edit this for me.