An Interview with Toumal: The SoFurry Search Function
You can see our efforts in the forum, and we will definitely do a public beta of the new interface, so there's plenty of time to give feedback! **heuvadoches:** well, thank you very much, toumal. we do appreciate these updates from time to time.
The World Games Convention - Chapter 2: A letter to Dewi
#2 of the world games convention greatly looking forward to feedback of how to improve telling a story through letters!
Hull Breach (Otherwise Untitled)
Alarms ringing, the distinctive whine of a void reactor ramping into a feedback state, confused yells from the other crew members, and what sounded like plasma discharges from a ruptured axial conduit.
Wolfsbane Excerpt #1
This excerpt is not 100% complete, however i have done some minor editing on this small piece, and i'd love to hear your feedback. what more could be done with my style? does the flow seem right?
Five nights at Jack's (part 7) The end
But not too long tell me what you think, feedback is appreciated. lots of love ~nitro
Adventures in College: Chapter Two
Thank you to all my watchers and any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Chapter VIII: Return of the Master
"if this keeps going on the feedback loop might explode, and if the wires are too strong this might take out the whole county and cause thousands of years of ecological damage."
Zistopia: Inner City Blues Chapter 12
I've gotten no negative or positive feedback, and my story is now getting much too far from theirs! i hope they'd like my stuff, though!)
Editing
If i am writing a professional novel with 150,000 words and my reputation is on the line, then i will have 10 drafts, send the story to friends & family for feedback, and then i will send it to another professional who will edit this for me.
Of Satyr and Gods Pt. 1
If i get good feedback, i may write up the second part. which will actually have something sexy in it._ crashing through the undergrowth, the girl fled. her sobs were loud and her breathing heavy as she blindly ran through the trees.
Terpsichorean
So as usual, feedback is lovely and so is spreading the word of this! spread the word about the word (of the day)! and enjoy~ terpsichorean- 1. pertaining to dancing 2.
Apocalypse book Chapter 1
Any feedback about it would be great. i know this is short, but aren't all stories boring in the first chapter? \*trumpet sound\* a giant lash of fire lashes out at a widowed mother.