Chapter 4: When They First Met
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Chapter 3: The Hive
Enjoy reading, review and please follow. and when you see words in this type then a xenomorph is talking. chapter 3: the hive jason aimed and started shooting at the unknown creatures.
The Freehorn's Scars - Chapter 3
I've spent a couple hours reviewing and editing each chapter over the course of a couple weeks, but it's still a little rough around the edges. bear with me, and enjoy!
Pink Salmon
Many thanks go to glass and the stickman for peer review and general motivation; you should also check out their own cute artwork!
Splintered Light, Ch 1.1: As the Sun Rises
From there the discussion moved forward to reviewing navigation charts and planning out the trip.
Organic Blackberries
Additional thanks go to glass the wolf and the stickman for peer review while i was editing! i appreciate their motivation too. the thumbnail is cropped from a shaded version of a reference sheet that combat raccoon drew me.
A New Job - Part 1
Turning on his computer stardust stared at the information on potential jobs waiting for him to review. three were part time, five where zero hours, six where limited time on crap pay and a bunch of scams.
Aniu; Day 5
Of course his excuses only fueled her anger more seeing as there was a meeting and review today. derek only response was he didn't know that was planned for today that didn't go over well.
David the demon ch1-3
I am here to review current conditions." the dragon on david's shoulder jumped off and landed gently on the ground. " for a demon he has been very kind so far.
A new pet
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Little Wings of the Storm
I like it, but on personal review, i just don't think i did a very good job. meh, not bad enough not to share; i want to improve, don't i? anyway, if you have something to say about my work, go ahead and tell me!
the adventures of voi
Authors note: this was the first chapter of a story that ive been working on for awhile now. plz review i crave constructive criticism. if anyone was wondering where i got the name voi from my friend told me voi means mind in greek and like the idiot i am