Neighborhood Relationships

As we left my mom started talking to laina. even though me and dan were in my room we could still hear the conversation between my mother and laina.

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Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others

Sometimes when there's lots of speech going on and people are just talking normally, you need to just add it in with the speech tags so readers keep track of who is speaking. rather than potentially, all those 'saids' getting turned into different words.

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The Card Master Chapter 1

After arriving at the speech, he sat through it, barely paying attention. however one part of the speech catches his ears. "there are cards in our world, some that very few will live to tell of.

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Change in Venue- November

The president stops speaking for a moment to collect himself before speaking up again. "as are all of you i find myself very frustrated at our inability to prevent these incidences nor have we been able to find anyone who we can prove is responsible.

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Static Memory Record 86-75309

I'd had such poor luck speaking with the human staff i had become concerned that all the finagling my owner had done to get me into the hospital in the first place would've been all for naught. i should've thought of talking to the equipment sooner!

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A new school year

They spent the whole time before first period talking, and yuukan found he was looking forward to the school year.

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The Beginning With No End

I was talking to narei over the internet, "brb! i got to have a bath". i replied to this as the usual replies go "ok, speak soon". i closed the conversation thinking nothing of it, when i received a reply "you're meant to say, ok!

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Aria's Tale- Chapter 1 *Sunday Mass*

Aria strained her ears to hear the conversation, and was rewarded when she heard her name mentioned by the wolf. aria immediately became very excited and focused even harder on the conversation.

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Giving a Hand

The conversation was so nice, and tom was so distracted looking at the other side of the lake, that he didn't even notice the huge gate right in front of them at first.

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Five Nights at Furries

What was i talking about? haha, i go off on so many tangents that i basically never have any idea what i was talking about. hold on, i have my list right here... umm... just gimme... a second... there it is. it was buried under my desk for some reason.

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Teenage love (true story) chapter 1

Her freinds look at her and shrug as they all go back to their conversation. the girls turn they're heads as they hear the teacher scream "johnson!!!!"...again.

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