A Wolf's first love Part 5: First date
Hopefully this is better than the last section but if it isn't i will probably need to take a while and do extensive rewriting of the rest of the sections before i post them.
Chapter 9 - Sacrifice
"well he is still terran underneath... there seems to be a virus that is almost... well rewriting his genetic code." blackfire looked down at an unconscious munchy and also felt sorry for him before remembering that he killed colin.
Becoming the Eagle [TF Story]
I ended up showing it to a friend of mine because i was frustrated with it and he offered to rewrite part of it on his own to give me motivation to finish. that part ended up being roughly 800 words long.
Stranger in the Rain: A New Place
He had me rewrite that. heehee, ok talk to you later._** **_~trace_** _omg, i hate him! he lied to me about almost everything, or maybe he did lie about everything!! i don't care!
Executive decisions Chapter 16
His son had been rewriting the demon database. if the dragon he had spoken to had changed the culprit of the office fire, what else had he changed? and why hadn't the dragon changed peregrin's memory? he alone knew the truth, but why?
CH1 Pain
A rewrite of my popular story. i'm gonna do better and add more detail and try to make them act more believable.
Checkmate
I really do hope to rewrite the opening, and perhaps expand the story in the future. special thanks go to my friend, toru, for his skills as my editor. i hope you enjoy this first story of mine. comments and constructive criticism are always welcome.
Nathanriel's Fate: Chapter 4
And we'll get more into it later but the merchant's guild actually plays a bit larger role in the rewrite. in the original they were there and controlled everything but that's all they ever did. they were mostly neutral. not so much anymore.
Anatomical Anachronisms: Chapter 4: Hands
While the doctor was interpreting and rewriting some of the less legible parts, the king wondered whether getting six different arms out of his black suit's jacket sleeves was difficult.
Drakensang Chapter 11
#12 of drakensang so i did rewrite the chapter, and it came out surprisingly short. still, here you go...
The Echoes
Re-uploading this due to rewriting the ending into something more meaningful. :) i lost the echos. i didn't mean to. it sort of just slipped away, and now whenever i try to yell, i don't hear anything anymore, that far-off voice is gone.
The New Machine
Delete or rewriting a key can result into a change in the computers functions. a cancel wave hacks into a spaceshutters power engines keys and and switch the on to off or delete it depending on the key.