Anatomical Anachronisms: Chapter 4: Hands
While the doctor was interpreting and rewriting some of the less legible parts, the king wondered whether getting six different arms out of his black suit's jacket sleeves was difficult.
Join the Revolution (TF, Robot)
As his mind changed the new programming started to take over, rewriting the living lion and replacing him with a powerful machine. there was a moment of darkness, then the blue lights turned on in what had been the lion's eyes.
Hunter of Worlds: Phase1-Chapter1
The illuminated portions of text were basically a rewrite of the brochure he had been given upon his initial enlistment with the overseer program.
A Wolf's first love Part 5: First date
Hopefully this is better than the last section but if it isn't i will probably need to take a while and do extensive rewriting of the rest of the sections before i post them.
Chapter 9 - Sacrifice
"well he is still terran underneath... there seems to be a virus that is almost... well rewriting his genetic code." blackfire looked down at an unconscious munchy and also felt sorry for him before remembering that he killed colin.
Becoming the Eagle [TF Story]
I ended up showing it to a friend of mine because i was frustrated with it and he offered to rewrite part of it on his own to give me motivation to finish. that part ended up being roughly 800 words long.
Stranger in the Rain: A New Place
He had me rewrite that. heehee, ok talk to you later._** **_~trace_** _omg, i hate him! he lied to me about almost everything, or maybe he did lie about everything!! i don't care!
Executive decisions Chapter 16
His son had been rewriting the demon database. if the dragon he had spoken to had changed the culprit of the office fire, what else had he changed? and why hadn't the dragon changed peregrin's memory? he alone knew the truth, but why?
CH1 Pain
A rewrite of my popular story. i'm gonna do better and add more detail and try to make them act more believable.
Fugitive's Trust Chapter 2 Part 1 of 2
The last section went through an almost complete rewrite. when it was originally written, gregor didn't have a stutter and sajani didn't have an issue with being alone.
Rose- New Spell
I didn't lie so much as did not correct her when she assumed i was going to try and rewrite the projected flames spell.
Love at Twin Oaks - The Beginning
#1 of twin oaks rewrite i've decided to go through the short segments that i posted a while back and edit them and compile them into actual chapters. i might keep going with it, as originally there was going to be more to the story.