Ethan's Good Day
I know i said in that journal that my longer story should be up by now, but my beta reader got back to me recently and i'm trying to consider how to best implement their advice still.
Etiquette for the Modern Lycan--Ch.5: Vampires Are a Bad Idea
I've given you some stories that contain some very sound advice. now i am going to tell you a story about a mistake i made myself that nearly cost me my life.
A Fox, a Dog and a Raven - Chapter 15 (The Date - Part 1)
Naruto silently cursed, 'i can't let kiba get to me, i have to follow iruka's advice and tell him to... wait that's it!' "hinata!"
Tales From The Tricolor Beguile: Introductions in Order
"my advice? don't. don't try to figure out that stuff now." "...what?" "you're focusing too much on the future to see the present.
Vignette from The Highway
I can help you over the guard-rails and give you advice, but the rest is up to you." he hugged me tight, and i felt him crying quietly for a time as i held him. i nuzzled him with the black nose on the end of my narrow muzzle.
A Blast From the Past Ch. 3
I just wanted to give you some advice... i've been a father for twelve years now, and three children." the doctor offered his hand and said, "i'm doctor mckinley. pleasure to meet you kaga..."
Perspective - Chapter 1
Alas, that is no longer the case and i find myself trying to remember ever word of drunken advice or halfhearted posturing that i can in an effort to try and get in the swing of things again.
Trust Me?
Bars, cars, making fun of profs, helping with the homework, giving advice about family life; they did everything that best friends did, and that's where kyle wanted it to stay. "kyle?" kyle's head turned at aqua's tone.
Serval and Sheep (Chapter 30)
"i'm sure your father can give you some great advice if you need it!" "wai--" "and she doesn't have to be a rock dove, you know." his father continues. "your cousin benny started dating a quail, if you can believe it--" "hold it!"
Ander - Chapter 6, Subchapter 1
One night of passion in the hayloft or out behind the barn or splashing around in the lake was all it took to change your life forever, and that was rightfully terrifying, but bethany's advice had always been the same, every single time, and that advice was
Jeremy 078; Selection
Jeremy listened to his advice for nearly half an hour. he'd known before hand gakota had far more experience than him but this was the true sign of just how much he would need the male's help.
Transformed Struggles- 4
I take their advice and back in the world outside my mind i lift what had been my right hand and move it and place it down.